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And you've been making music how long? |
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Sorry big but I just didn't like this. I've heard stuff of yours before and it was infinitely better. |
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3 days :p computer music 1,5 years, music in general 10 years i hope you meant it as a compliment :) |
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i think you used a bit too much delay on this one. it throws off the rhythms. i like the synth riffs, but everything is too saturated in delay. also, maybe think about making the beats heavier-sounding. give them some more bass and perhaps compress them. |
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okays, too bad, it's meant to sound sound really computer cold actually the concept was untilted meets analord |
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it ain't givin me no orgasm |
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mm, i thought there was alot of bass in them, maybe it's my system only yea, i wanted to use alot of delay, i thought the delay times nicely worked together (they are all different) btw this is my first track on which i havent used presets i hoped you guys would like it more, actually i wanted to explore this sound further, maybe it's just too new? |
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*gives money back |
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It's a nice idea but it needs refining mate. Work on it a bit longer and tighten it up a bit. Really rein in the delay so that it works for the timing rather than against it. |
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d/l, i hope it's as good as Your new avatar :) otherwise i'm leaving The Big Fan-Club |
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maybe ill do, dunno yet *keeps fingers crossed for obara |
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i know i suck at beats btw |
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The latter half has something to it (nice soundscape), but the soft-synth is pretty dreadful. like giginger said, hyperdelaying ain't the best way to go about, at least second-filter it somehow perhaps? The bass/drum department is above average. I give it C+. |
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you CAN DO AND HAVE DONE better than this. whats going on? |
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a). The name is great. b). Too much delay is a good thing in my book. c). I really like it, go Big! I think it builds nicely, I like the way it ends, and I applaud your bid to do something new. |
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i dont get it, i thought this was my best track to date :? *belches in dan's honor |
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it's a bit sad track r40f might be right about the drums, they might be stronger. but imo the track has it's own mood, it's quite biggie-style, i like it the way it is [ yeah, except that delay maybe... ] don't give up |
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:) |
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bump i still think it's my bestest track maybe i should've added a pad, if only noise, and maybe the last synth sounds a bit less good, but that's it what do you mean with second-filtering boxbob? |
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i liked this |
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Practically every single response I have heard about music in here lately; 1-Needs tightening 2-Needs more bass 3-Make the beats beefier Somebody needs to write a shell for this site that just randomly adds one of those three pieces of advice to every thread that starts with [spam]... The link didn't work... so I couldn't listen to it, but, if I did I might think it needs a bit more loosening, its too bassy, and if those beats were any beefier little chunks of hamburger would be spewing out of my subwoofer. Change those things and you might have yourself a workable track m8 :) |
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Kay... this time it worked... I really liked the second half, but I thought the first half sounded a bit too fruityloops... and that reverbed noise sound that shows up every bar is kind of annoying. |
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it's kinda cool, but it should have a big fat hip hop beat under it and maybe some suburban highschool gangstas rapping on it. that would be ILL! |
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if you were to drop a huge Kill Bill theme song kinda hip hop drum beat at about the 2:00 mark, this track could be sweet like hella dope word g bomb sweet serious! |
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actually its pretty cool the way it is. forget all that crap about that other stuff i'm kinda baked. ! |
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haha, you guys are funny :) well the joke on you, taxxidermatron, is that i got that fruity remark quite often in the beginning of my music making, but now i didnt use any fruity. nevertheless i guess you're right, but fruity sounds better then this. oh, i did use fruity, 404, for the main melody in the beginning and the bass i especially agree with evolume about not changing anything anyhoo: tnx alot for listening everyone |
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big: by second-filtering (an ad hoc phrase) I just meant minimizing the spill-over effect by one way or another modulating the output delay. Maybe not the kind of autechre hyper-cautious overproduction, but something like variable pan/freq/treble-control. Anyway, just a suggestion. ;) I like the latter synths though. and yes, the fruity-sound comes through, especially where it was actually used, like you say. I would've put the fruity-melody through some kinda FX-machine and twist some extra knobs, coz knobs i like, round and hard. |
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what's a good acid plugin? and i dont mean the running bassline acid of tweakbox for instance, the other acid sound |
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Well, I don't mean the second half sounds too fruityloops... the first half does though. i really think if you removed the first part, and expanded on the latter, you would have a serious killer song there. The jokes on me? I am a matron? |
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okay, no funnies then erm, i just thought that 404 thing couldnt sound fruityloops since it's only one oscilator wave in this case.., i like the sound of the bass of it anyway |
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No... I didn't mean the 404... there is a bunch of stuff that makes the same sounds as the TS404 (although flp's 404 does sound skinnier than the other ones I have tried). I was meaning the way it was sequenced had that fruityloops sound... but its just the beginning of the song. Don't jump on me for hearing how something was sequenced. I know the 16 beat thing is standard, but songs made in each program seem to sound sequenced differently, and I don't know a better way to describe it) |
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oh, i stretched my back though by programming to 1/3 and the delay sounds. it was just a concept to make it sound like that, much like ae and untilted i tried it (i presume you mean the beats now) |
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okay, for all that liked it: the volume is upped alot, so now it's even better bye |
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its funny, as an honest analord joke... |
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yea :) and untilted |
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i dont get the untilted part, sorry, but thats maybe cause i havent heard the ae album yet... :) |
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it's oldskool drumsounds |
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