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I am very pleased with my work on this one. Comments and suggestions totally welcome. |
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Check it out! |
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your name is very cool |
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No speakers at work, sorry boss. You can call my work and play it over the phone for me if you want! I'll download it when I get home for shizzle meng : ) |
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Didn't do anything for me. Sorry man. |
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it sounds very generic to me, both in sounds used and in structure. it also kind of lingers on, doesn't seem to have much direction. in short, not for me. |
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sounds kinda dry but it`s not bad. You should work on that and give it some direction, cause for now it sounds just like 1000 idm tracks to me. |
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Wooah ladies, wooah, this is really good, I LIKE IT, I think you've done a great job. The melody I keep thinking is going to break into, ooh a track off of Geogaddi "You could feel the sky"? not sure, but that's not such a bad thing. In fact it sounds like BOC remixed, have BOC ever been remixed? What the fuck am I on about? |
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ive d/l it |
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thx for the comments ppl, and thank you very much mr dog_belch! Any more listeners? I'm aching to get loads of people to listen. |
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Flashes of really good stuff but in general I think it needs mo'work kid. The beatwork for me falls between repetative but enjoyable and drill type variation...and this makes the beats feel rather amature. Where the synth comes in at 1 minute it is brilliant for 15 seconds...you should have carried on that style for more of the track. |
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bump :) |
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I agree with ecnadniarb, I think it is missing something. Perhaps if you add in some white noise perhaps a noticable break. |
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ok thx for listening :) |
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did you hear that BUMPing sound? |
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I've had this on repeat and the more I listen to it, the more I really like it. I mean I REALLY like it. |
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wa-hey! You see, it's not a very accessible track. It takes work for you to like it. |
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It really could be an excellent track with a little more work. |
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Originally I wasn't going to put more work into it but I think you have convinced me to do so ecnadniarb |
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I like the change when you bring the bass synth in, that gives it some nice fullness, it just doesn't last long enough. One idea, move on, no real transitions, just off and on... not doing it for me. The tempo changes are nice, I like those a lot... downtempo and back up. But again, it just starts dragging, you put in that deep synth then took it out and never put it back in. The song climaxed really early. I'll just leave it at that... some more work and it'd be quite spicy |
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Listening now and it's very nice. Good style to the whole track. Needs a little more polish maybe. I can't really comment on that side of things though :P |
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Thanks you two for listening :) Your comments have been taken on board. |
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im in agreement with giginger i think also adding what i can only decribe as a round fattness to the beats (imo) would sound good |
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i like the tempo increaseat the start, drums do sound a bit generic, synth pad is great soundin, the build up at 0:55 is good, the beat change at 1:36 is good, and i like the beat tempo changes, end was quite nice too. i think it could do with maybe a bridge section, cos it was quite repetitive, overall i liked it tho |
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