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i still hate him |
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tender violin. |
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2008 bump |
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"Now You're Gone" A poem by me. ----- Now you're gone I realised my love for you was strong And I miss you here now you're gone I keep waiting here by the phone with your pictures hanging on the wall Now you're gone I realised my love for you was strong And i miss you here now you're gone I keep waiting here by the phone with your pictures hanging on the wall Is this the way it's meant to be? Only dreaming that you're missing me I'm waiting here at home I'll be crazy now you're gone There's an empty place in my heart Without my Anna it will break apart It won't heal, it never fades away I'll be thinkin' 'bout you everyday Are you Ready? Ready for take-off! Now you're gone I realised my love for you was strong And i miss you here now you're gone I keep waiting here by the phone with your pictures hanging on the wall Is this the way it's meant to be? Only dreaming that you're missing me I'm waiting here at home I'll be crazy now you're gone Now you're gone I realised my love for you was strong And i miss you here now you're gone I keep waiting here by the phone with your pictures hanging on the wall Is this the way it's meant to be? Only dreaming that you're missing me I'm waiting here at home I'll be crazy now you're gone There's an empty place in my heart It won't alarm me it will break apart It won't heal, it never fades away I'll be thinkin' 'bout you everyday |
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cool, i am wrong too |
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here, a poem much better than 'mistakes' and on the same bloody theme: I must have been blind Here I am believing words again Here I am trying to find your love again Here I am down on my knees again Praying for a love we used to know Both of us know how hard it is to love and let it go Both of us know how hard it is to go on living that way But so few know what it means to fall in love And so few know how hard it is to live without it Lord I must have been blind Lord I must have been blind Lord I must have been blind Lord I must have been blind To hold something real and not believe it To live in her life and never trusting To give all you know and never feel it Hold back each day until it dies away Both of us know how hard it is to love and let it go Both of us know how hard it is to go on living that way But so few know what it means to fall in love And so few know how hard it is to live without it Lord I must have been blind Lord I must have been blind Lord I must have been blind |
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usually drink usually dance usually bubble a poem |
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this thread is xltronic capsulated. |
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i wish i didn't read it |
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I just took a pizzzzzz it came out of my snizzzzzz it went and made some fizzzzzz and now I have to jizzzz Go and grab some pooorn and I grab my shnoorn honk it like a hooorn i wish I wasn't booorn for my soul I mooourn as happy as canned cooorn bananas skittle fueled spaceships tuna fish sandwiches feetholes *clicks tongue and snaps fingers* |
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i dont like poetry, but that was nice. |
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GOD where is peckerhands it havn't been LAUGHT TIME in like 4 EVER |
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just let it flow man, whatever comes to mind |
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I'll write one: Real humans have a people face, with people eyes and tongues that taste. They live in nests and fly past trees, and have singular horns that summon bees. Bees will answer to the ancient sky, with parachute pants that aren't quite dry. Their honey's from the teet of a maiden with shame, who cried bloody mary but had no one to blame. The people are dressed in their leather and lace, and walk around town with their legs in a brace. They sing to the air and breathe in the sky, and whisper to jonny please tell me a lie. Bloody Luey had 50 he got on a train, in the box car he shuffled and then went insane. The trains name was numbers it had seven eyes, Its teeth were like roses with thorns on its mind. |
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Poetry is an inordinate love for life. REVEDY |
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glasse, please don't open up. You're almost at Funkmaster stature. |
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my poem will be misunderstood in its own time, but future generations will regard it as special. also, i'm not really opening up its kinda sarcastic innit. |
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if you think your work is good, why not enter a monthly competition to win cash prizes? from $75 to $20,000 iv'e been trying to work on one to submit |
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aactualy it's every 24 hours, there is a clock counting down to the next comp |
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Haha! Beautiful. "I decided to batter you with my feelings" popped into my mind the other day. Timeless. |
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FOR LARN i lived near links view its smelled like pepe le-pew thou only a mile away i dare only go there by day its not comfy sleeping on the landing its like beruit only standing its a shithole of sorts pls dont post any retorts |
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wel i liked it FUCK YOU |
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It's as good as anything Trent Reznor has ever written! |
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flying minds and poeple laughing, but where is my promised one? deep |
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Has anyone laughed at this bollocks this year? |
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larn?did you enter a poem? |
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haha- exactly. :) |
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ohhh thanks for that 'links view' eh? lol that is a rough spot. thanks >_^ hey atwood, i haven't done one yet, I prefer writing short stories. perhaps we can start a new thread about short stories |
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Now that's poetry. :) |
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...As is that. |
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"its like beruit only standing" haha! brilliant. |
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peotry the wankiest of all artforms |
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Reads more like a song, what with the repetition and all. But it's OK, I guess. |
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Oh and music is the highest, right? Just because it's the only one you understand... *rolls eyes at The Dude* Anyway, why don't you try to write one- you might like it! :) |
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twenty twelve more attention does this thread deserve tonight |
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you are not wrong!!! |
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Come back The_Funkmaster |
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That poem funkmaster wrote is really aweful. It is just some guy whining. I bet women hate that! |
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drummond is awesome |
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Oh god, I forgot about that picture. Ziltyriffic. |
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haha, so did i! |
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ahh man, i'm glad i actually went back and read all that. the poem was so wank that it put me off even reading any of the replys. ha. bants. fav+ |
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Why are you laughing at a person who is trying to express hus feelings? Do you know the damage this might do to a youbg person. I dont know anything about poetry, but language is of course very important if you try to connect with another person. So, how is one going to find a proper language or style to express emotions? |
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good question |
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We must periodically suppress the brutals or they will rise up and overwhelm the vortex. |
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Go forth, and kill! Zilty has spoken. |
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merrily into the future a grandiose, donkey rose. it welded itself truthfully into the social acceptance like fact on wikipedia. like the graceful many women holding plentiful its teat all great and most dearly, amongst the feeding born of its own wealth. Grease tits. --- A rather strong poem I created about the birth of the banking world. I think you will agree. |
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I fogrot metallicadude's incantation to post an image without paying the extortion fee. http://images.4chan.org/p/src/1328730659891.jpg |
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fuckie wuckie fuckie duckie |
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