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Woo, I'm a happy chappie. This track is just what I needed. Comments mostly appreciated! |
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the production is good - the mix is good. the tempo changes are very good. but the riffs are too static... if there were chord changes, it would be way better. same with the drums - they are too underdeveloped (especially at the beginning). if you work on this more - change things up - it will pay off. |
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and i do really like the hazelwood-esque 3/4 weirdo meltdown you got happening there... has a lot of potential! |
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thanks mate. you are a most wise fountain of knowledge |
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I agree 100% with r40f here. |
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thanks for listening i like your avatar, it's well jackson |
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Spooky melodies w/ drunken style drums at the start. I like. I wish it did a bit more, like had the ahh's a bit higher or floating around or something. I dunno tho, when it kicks in it pleases my ears. V good. |
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thank you very much for listening. I'm not sure if I recognise you. Nice to meet you :D |
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Yeah you should deffo do an extended version of this and go all out on the production. I really love the melodies and pitch shifts, I'll keep this track. If you do another ver lemme kno. I'll try and keep an eye out for it. Nice to meet you too. |
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There's a high chance i'll do an extended version. I'll keep the thread updated in the future |
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as soon as im finished eating lunch ill download cant wait to hear this |
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I do really like the tempo changes and The melodies are great but I do think there are a few moments when the changes are too abrupt...even all the little sounds floating around at great. I think if you did have some chord changes like what was said ealier in this thread, it would benefit the song. The sound itself is high quality, good mixing skills |
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thanks very much for listening :P I must give your spam a listen |
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[TRACK UPDATED] put a good few extra hours into it |
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downloading You missed a great opportunity to title this version "messed up tu-tu". |
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i don't know what you mean but lol :D |
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good melodies (especially at 1:30), remind me of Plaid, as do most of your melodies. Tempo changes are interesting, but again theres something about the drums (generic sounding) that put me off, although i do like the snare drum. Track length is perfect, dont think it needs exteneded at all. Overall Good un' |
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thanks for listening :D |
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^bump |
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the melody sounded uninspired (sounds similar to another track i heard from you). the beats are rather boring. production is crisp. imho :) |
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Thanks for your time. If I were you I would have stopped listening to my music a long time ago! Thanks for listening. Comments from you are always appreciated, my most critical listener :) |
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yeah, shit man, i'm sorry for sounding so negative. i'll always download your tracks, i'm somewhat compelled to hear how your stuff progresses :) |
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thumbs up, added to my Bitraete folder - but i agree with r40f about the drums, seem not to fit in the track mood |
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bum |
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ooh a folder have I! I feel special. thx for listening :D |
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3333 points on the way !!!! congrats !!! |
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woo! |
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keep it foolish! |
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i ate quite a few flyagaric mushrooms today |
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