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yo is a new tracks i'm working on... here we have my portfolio version, i just handed in as part of my university assessment. it may even find its way on to my lp coming out late this year... comments/disses, extremely appreciated |
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not found? i can't make it work muh man |
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mi2 |
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it's cool. i wish the end was a bit louder. and maybe "beep-ier" but yeah it's cool. kinda churchy but like futury. |
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lots of nice textures, ambience and melody in the beginning. a good noise and experimental track. on that skipping part at the end, i think it would be nice to try a different effect or combination of filters every time it loops. but i liked it as is. good work. |
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cheers evol & oddio :) |
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the ending bit is actually the bridge into the next track of my portfolio... did it in a bit of a rush this morning, its just a series of edited excerpts from live improvs... but the first 1:40 is officially "shards" :) |
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First off, I found this to be a very interesting track. It gave me the impression of life, that is to say, it was some sort of entity (musical entity) as if the track itself were alive. To start off, in the first minute, everything is going nicely, things are working fine. The lifeform is beautiful and flourishing. Then around the 0:45-1:00 period I hear what sounds like a malfunction. The outside beauty of the entity remains intact, but inside something is going horribly wrong. This fracturing builds up, causing more and more internal damage until finally at the 1.30 mark SHARDS tears through the outer skin, destroying the beauty, and the entity's functions grind to a halt at 2:00. From this point on I get the impression that the track/being is now in a minimal state, trying to repair itself. The tempo is slow but there is a definite base structure to the sounds. Healing will take time but is possible. The last noise of pain at the end leaves me guessing "Did it repair or did it die? " I hope that this track is unfinished and you continue to rebuild this beautify lifeform and restore it to its former glory. Thanks for sharing another great piece of music teapot, keep up the good work. I hope this impresses your assessors as much as it impressed me. |
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thanks for the nice description mate... my description of the track in the essay was "sun peaking through the clouds after some sort of apocolypse" so its good to hear that it made you think of something, not necessarily the same, but it evoked a feeling :) i am intending on extending it, and it is very much still a work in progress |
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It is amazing how music can make one person feel one thing and someone else can get something completely different. I suppose there are many factors that will influence how someone will perceive a musical piece. Mood, relationship with the creator, exposure to past music, etc. Me at the moment: I am about to go to sleep after a 9 hr night shift, I have no idea what your university assessment is based on, nor do I know you or your music well enough to 'get inside your head' so to speak. I will keep a look out for the finished version if you decide to ever post it online though. Thanks again! |
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cheers bro! :) |
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bumptee |
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Yay!!! |
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yay?? :D bump!!!! |
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I checked it, but forgot to say: NICE! (I can't give in-depth feedback at the moment (and quite possibly not for a while). I have to get rid of this awful tinnitus, and can therefore only listen with one ear...) |
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It's good...lots of depth...I hadn't read anything you had written when I first listened to it...and the impression I had was of a nightmare reawakening. At first I wasn't sure about the static type sounds...but when the siren type sounds start at 1:30 it felt like to was the power coming back in a city and then every alarm in the area started to sound only to die out again...leaving nothing. Good work. |
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bump |
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I've just added this to my oh-so-long queue |
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yea! aight |
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This track is great, the sounds at the start are beautiful and i love the fragmented part at the end, can't wait for part 2. Jazembo: That description was spot on for me :) |
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holy fuck that song radder than shit i love when the beat comes in at the end!# but i wish it would continue and grow and grow, it would make my day. great piece though! |
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d/l atm also wheres my cd? |
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<3 it |
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thanks doodes :) check out my brand new lp on aud.stim :D |
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Ill try and check this when I got home :) |
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