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helloa, i added a new track on my zebox recently.. i have a load of tracks waiting to be put on an album and i decided not to spam any of them untill it where all finished. but now i got a track that im really insecure about.. im not sure if this track is really good enough or if its simply crap. so im hunting comments and critics here.. i really cant make up my mind about it so ill appreciate all the help i can get track is called Good evening! |
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well... it's a pretty normal track. It seems like the inspiration behind its creation was more imitative than original. Like aphex created music from his imagination for himself. But music is memetic, meaning that, since it plays aloud, it replicates its information into people's minds. And since people will be thinking about it when they hear it, there's a chance that some of those people will want to make music for themselves. They'll tend to make things similar to what they've heard perhaps. This track has touches of squarepusher + other electronic artists. The changes don't flow perfectly from one another, like the changes aren't very meaningful or logical, or even very emotional in some way, they're just changes. The changed parts in come2 daddy for example flow perfectly imo. |
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For me it was entertaining for one listen. But in summary the track was too standard for me to want to hear again. |
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i get your point even if im tired as hell having problems reading =) maybe ill cut this track out of my "album" collection.. im not sure becouse i like the melody.. but when you say this i think i can honestly say that the drums sound way to flat even thou they are quite variated. maybe ill take the melody and use it for an completely different track.. even thou that feels wrong and boring aswell. thanks for listening |
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bumpy wumpy |
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Nothing wrong with this track in my opinion mate. Good middle of an album track I think :) |
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thanks.. i im going to have it on my album then it would be a number 12 out of 20 so it's a middle track youere right about that. thanks for listening good day ! |
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"if im going to have it on my album" that's the right sentence there |
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Sounds like a great track to me, plenty of variation and it has a good beat to it. Of course it is hard to say whether you should add it to your album since I have no idea what the album theme is or what the other tracks sound like. But then again, based on what you have previously released on the net I wouldn't worry too much if I were you :) Let us know when its finished,! |
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bump |
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thanks Jazembo youre allways a positive guy =) i finished another track for the album today.. think it will be the ending track of the album.. im not gonna release it on the net untill the whole album is finished, and hopefully i will find a nice net label to release it on.. it feels positive right now. and thanks for bumping giginger =D good day! |
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Interesting with the drum fades... Very in out, I like the ambience, very well put together. I like the chord progressions. Cool vocal cutups, like them in the background, good progressions overall Don't know how I feel about the drums, every once in a while I hear something that's really neat. Some of the Squarepusher tricks you got down well, some cool pitch trills and what not. They do sound flat in parts, but if you throw on some compression on just certain sections you could easily bring out what you want. Listening to it again... yes... needs a lot of compression to bring the drums to the levels you want, need to nitpick those snare sounds and change accents and stuff to pick the beat up and down and wherever. Can do that in mastering, don't worry about it too much now. I'd keep the track in the album Talented stuff man, very nice... love the drop at the end into the reverby keyboard noise, very appropriate, changes the mood quite nicely |
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my first thought was happy-hardcore, but it did improve. I really do understand and agree with what w M w said. I'm sure if you hadn't heard of squarepusher of aphex twin this track would not exist. "Good middle of an album track" hehe, this made me chuckle. In my head that translates as "FILLER". no offence intended! Not the most original track - i think you know that - but well executed! Put this on your album if you want to, but dont try to cram as much on their as possible - few great tracks, are better than lots of average ones :) [not posted on here in AGES!] |
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Jack? Holy G's!!! AWT i will listen when i wake up |
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