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its called it my first attempt at some proper drum programming let me know what you think :) |
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you've more patience than i. and it came out quite nice, didn't it? it's pretty mellow on the melody, but..yeah. i quite enjoyed this track. sounds clean, moves right along, and just..yeah. very well done, dr. nob. that high-pitched bit of melody-something at the end there, though, could've...hmm. done something more, though, i feel. it just kindof comes in, wavers a bit, then the track ends. but overall, i approve. let's have some more of it, now, mm? |
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i was a screwin on how to end this for most of today and couldnt come up with anything so i do apologize about the ending |
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Not too bad...got a bit boring though, not enough pattern variation. The melody was OK... |
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Programming is solid, I like the background sound, not the pad but the white noisy thing, that's solid too. Pad and plucks weren't doing it for me so much. I like the melody line, really subtle, doesn't get in your face too much. The stutters on the drums and melody are well placed, gives you a little nod Your stuff is definitly improving Track gets moving, enjoying it... but yeah, the drums are just a bit stale for me after a while Even though the programming part of it is changing up a bit because it's the same sound it ends up sounding repetitive anyways. Lot of the same rolls on the snare and lots of notes close together blend together pretty heavily. When the second drum line comes in it helps a lot but you don't play with that one as much. Maybe that helps? Maybe not. Lots of things to do better and lots of parts done really well, nice job! I got a remix track down a few threads if you feel like checking it out |
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this is a very good track with a lot going on. i agree that your sound is improving! i love the rythm stuff in it and i didn't find it boring at all. i like all the sounds you used too. great work |
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Interesting sound. The drum start with quite a funky beat and it kinda feels quite groovy and then goes a bit wishy washy. Its not bad though, just a bit uneffecting. But I've certainly heard worse. I think it needs like a phat baseline and maybe some strong pads and shit. But thats me, probably fits quite nicely within a string of other tracks, I just like shit hard and direct. I'm gonna listen to it a second time though. |
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Oohh... some fat booty bass line would kick it up a notch for sure |
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i haven't gotten to the end yet, but considering that is sounds like data transmission over a phone line in the song, end the song with a hangup or dialtone or something. and i am way to lazy to program drums like this. |
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i agree a squidgy bassline is the way to go, the bass you've got is nice at points but seems to get lost in the mix (maybe it's the mp3?). most of the programming and melodic elements i thought sounded great. maybe add just a little more depth and contrast and phat bass. glad to see you back, with another quality track! |
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thnx for you thoughts i did want a big bassline in it but im using a pc with a PII so is was difficult enough to do this without the track constantly clipping the bass i already had in it was quite low because it fcked the bass drum beats (distortion) and i plan to change the plinking crap to something else if anybody wants to donate a bassline i would be gratefull :) |
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I think I went a bit underboard when commenting, but that is only because I have started to expect a high standard from you. The drum programming is actually really good. As for the computer, when you are listening in real time during development you will get the clipping, but when it comes to the final mixdown/render you should have that problem if you have the levels set right. |
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nobsmuggler. I know what you're saying about using a PII. You've got to be imaginative because it struggles. |
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brain thats no problem for me with the audio export but i like to work as i go (if that makes sense) promo my comp is a cunt i can normally only manage about 5 instruments 3 if i use fx :( |
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but surely you could put up with the clipping if you know it isn't going to make it into the final cut. |
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not if its a glitch track i cant tell if the clips are me or the track sometimes |
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Mr Hall, can you make the bass line to go with this mixed down version? would that help the processor situation? |
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I think the rest of the board apart from the music makers should make some more effort to check people's trax. Not criticising or anything 'cause I've always checked people's trax whether I posted my own or not. |
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Hey Sanguine mate, wanna check my track? I've got a thread running 'My Sixth track ever online!'. Cheerz. |
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how do you know my last name? |
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i always try to |
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I know you do. Just you know it can be a bit frustrating when others don't check your trax. You know like I know a lot of the music makers tend to check each others but it'd be nice if some of the non music makers made more effort. |
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Seriously how do you know my last name? |
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It's on your zebox site you dope...by GMHall :D |
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ahh fck it i feel like a cunt |
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Whats that feel like out of interest? Lol. |
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moist and tangy with an unpleasent yet aluring aroma |
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Buff mate! The drums are very nice, but I prefer the synth. It's bloody gorgeous. Kind of smooth but a wee bit glitchy. And bass would be good, but I think only in parts. To have some dred bassline running throughout would ruin the mood and become boring. |
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"There are only two things that smell like tuna, and one of them's tuna." -- Dr. David Corker, during a seminar at University of East Anglia |
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dl'ing... |
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thnx john there is a post on klove for you :) |
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bump |
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pretty slick programmin, a little disjointed at times i.e it loses it's flow here and there but overall nice |
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the fckups are intended but need work |
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aah i c, thats different then :) |
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S'alright. The skittering drum roll thingy has been done to a death now though. |
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so has the 4 piece rock band |
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Has it? Thanks for letting me know. |
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yeah i know >[] was doing this 6-8 yrs ago but hes the daddy |
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last one bump |
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nice one, but not yet well done, need some more fire in it |
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thnx for listening im gonna clean this track at some point |
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That's cool man. I really like that :D |
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thnx giginger broadband being put to use :) |
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