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hevquip
from megagram dusk sect (United States) on 2025-11-11 03:50 [#02644874]
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it will sound shit on phone, sounds fine on speakers/headphones.
i don't know how to record or mix well. i am not able to do mastering.
i threw it together pretty quickly with an mpc and a few synths.
i don't need feedback on arrangement/composition, but how it actually *sounds* i.e. quality, levels, frequency ranges, volumes, etc. because that is what i currently suck at and need to focus on.
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from Where is Phobiazero (Lincoln) (United States) on 2025-11-11 04:12 [#02644875]
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If it sounds like shit on my phone which it doesn’t, I’d like to hear it on some real speakers
Don’t be so hard on….. Yourself dude.
It sounds good and I’m going to listen to others if that’s okay? I’d buy a cd 💿 or a rekerd, If those are affordable
My shit phone speakers are just fine
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Wolfslice
from Bay Area, CA (United States) on 2025-11-11 22:33 [#02644876]
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First, I think its mad pretentious to only ask for a specific type of feedback, as if your composition is so sacrosanct that you aren't able to use feedback to improve. I dunno, if you post a track just put it out there and take the feedback or dont post it. Its annoying enough to click an amateur spam but its downright unappetizing when you add those sort of qualifiers.
The track is decent, though it wears out its welcome by the end, because the fundamental melody isn't particularly interesting and youve shown it too many times without enough variation. When it locks in it sounds pretty good. I would just literally turn down the sharp lead a bit. Its loud in the mix (stock car stereo listen). I like the pads at 1:20.
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from Where is Phobiazero (Lincoln) (United States) on 2025-11-11 22:42 [#02644878]
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what?
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Wolfslice
from Bay Area, CA (United States) on 2025-11-11 22:51 [#02644879]
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I think my posts was clear! But what I'll clarify a bit is "its annoying to click an amateur spam."
That wasn't specific to hev. It applies to anyone who is didn't specifically seek out. I paused a listen of autechre- plus to listen to this track 3 times. Because I wanted to reward his effort in making music, really no other reason. So if ima do that, I want carte blanche on my feedback, full stop.
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Wolfslice
from Bay Area, CA (United States) on 2025-11-11 22:52 [#02644880]
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Posts= post is=i Autocorrects.
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from Where is Phobiazero (Lincoln) (United States) on 2025-11-11 23:57 [#02644883]
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🙂🙂🙂
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Wolfslice
from Bay Area, CA (United States) on 2025-11-11 23:59 [#02644885]
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Triple smiles warm the heart but give this dude some real feedback! Reach down into your soul and tell him what can be better in his music!
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from Where is Phobiazero (Lincoln) (United States) on 2025-11-12 00:06 [#02644888]
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Read post [#02644875] in this thread. I stand by it 100%
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hevquip
from megagram dusk sect (United States) on 2025-11-12 02:47 [#02644889]
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the arrangement/composition was done in about 5 minutes and was secondary to the overall goal of *recording* a track, hence my reason for not being particularly interested in feedback over something that i spent very little time & energy on; i already know it is lacking in that department.
trying to get the damn mix to sound right was what took up all my time and it's still scaring me away from committing my more developed ideas i have sitting around. i essentially have these shit tracks/disposable tracks to get out of the way first, where i kind of use each as something to teach myself one thing i can apply to the next.
the lead & bass were the 2 things i was wondering about the most, because the lead never sounded consistent across my monitors, headphones, or in the car, so i didn't know how to handle it. the bass definitely sounds like shit on phone (too deep), but wasn't sure if it sounded wide/muddy/overbearing compared to everything else. mixing & eq'ing on an analog board is so difficult.
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Roger Wilco
from Mo's Beans on 2025-11-12 08:16 [#02644890]
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Budget Analord crossed with Guantanamo enhanced interrogation Acid. It'd probably have done well in Germany 25 years ago.
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from Where is Phobiazero (Lincoln) (United States) on 2025-11-12 11:58 [#02644892]
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just press the jackal phyicallnessly and they will buy
bye
Roger.
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Roger Wilco
from Mo's Beans on 2025-11-13 15:25 [#02644897]
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Why, if you were worried about receiving feedback about sound "quality", would you post as an example something so juvenile and execrable as to not warrant any meaningful engagement?
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Roger Wilco
from Mo's Beans on 2025-11-13 15:27 [#02644898]
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People are busy, too busy, to ever, ever, fucking having to listen to this shit and give advice. You arrogant fucking piece of work.
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from Where is Phobiazero (Lincoln) (United States) on 2025-11-13 17:56 [#02644900]
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Kroger Roger roger
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hevquip
from megagram dusk sect (United States) on 2025-11-14 20:46 [#02644924]
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the satire is not lost on me, roger
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mohamed
from the turtle business on 2025-11-14 21:04 [#02644927]
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quitted halfway through but i like the use of modwheel, but 5 minutes of that maybe too much
energy in the analog sound i agree, bit less on arrangement/composition
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EpicMegatrax
from Greatest Hits on 2025-11-16 18:56 [#02644946]
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sorry that's not high energy
here is some high energy ~
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EpicMegatrax
from Greatest Hits on 2025-11-16 18:57 [#02644947]
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LAZY_TITLE
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Wolfslice
from Bay Area, CA (United States) on 2025-11-18 02:07 [#02644961]
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I 100% promise roger was not joking.
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hevquip
from megagram dusk sect (United States) on 2025-11-19 03:18 [#02644976]
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basic human nature/human psychology: i've been called arrogant & pretentious by 2 people in this thread and i'm expected to remain civil & respectful towards them, correct?
a) "yes"
b) "no"
c) deflect/non answer (which is another way of saying "yes")
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Wolfslice
from Bay Area, CA (United States) on 2025-11-20 00:25 [#02644979]
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B. You dont to be civil holmes, im a hardened internet veteran. Do your worst! And I dont even think you're pretentious holistically like you meant. You just asked for a favor in a particularly inept way a single time. Keep making music.
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