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Hi. This is Adam once again, I have for you not a video, but original music that I have made. I would really like to know what all of you think, and if you don't like a trak, just skip but it. Don't leave the page. Thank you all. -Adam. |
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Sorry, wrong link. That should work. Thanks again. -Adam. |
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i like the melodies on surrounding spec ula... should be longer. when food stuff er starts my though is why not a differ ent synth sound? the drums are good. again, should go longer. your drum pro gramming recalls hangable auto bulb. together it sounds more like luke vibert. i think you should expand your neoclass ical style to include some counterpoint + more effects. the tracks are too linear. to support the syncopated polyrhythms you want stronger melodies. listen to ae. |
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i so much don't want to go to myspace, sorry. can't make myself already. |
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Syncopated polyrhythms? Linear? Counterpoint? Neoclass? I am 14 for god sake. I have no idea what you just said. I am not really into the technical aspect of music. I just do what feels right to me. -Adam. |
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well congs then |
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You have a thing about myspace? -Adam. |
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I am interested in what you thought about the euphoric kingdom. -Adam. |
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i dislike myspace too, and im sure that feeling afects my perception of your music. that one minute track is nice, but some sounds are almost as awful as the page design... |
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Ok, what sounds do you mean, and they are all close to a minute. -Adam. |
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the first one, then... cant remember what sound i meant... but, well, if it was what you felt, then its ok. there were nice ones too! and, can you stop signing all your posts, please? |
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Sorry. It is a habbit. |
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yep. it is a crazy website. it looks very bad. |
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no prob, itll be better for your image that way. have a good time |
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Polyrhythms = When you've got several rhythms of constant notes on top of each other, for example in the same bar: -16 16th notes -8 8th notes -12 triplet 8th notes etc. etc. There seems to be quite a lot of this at points in Surround Specula. lol I'm 14 aswell and I kinda understand the rest but they're hard to describe. This is strange stuff, but nice. As said earlier, HAB drums over video-game-like pads. What did you use to make it? Try making your stuff longer, and give it more of a structure with a build up and climax. BTW do NOT expect constructive criticism from guys at XLT lol. Have a listen to my music and . |
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Could you tell me what you thought of the euphoric kingdom? I just finished it, and really would like to have feedback. |
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Probably the one with the most HAB like drums to it. Very video gamey melodies, the organ reminds me of N64 games (that's not a bad thing). Again, should be longer and built on a bit more, I wouldn't say it's finished yet. |
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I don't think it is a bad thing at all. I love the retro games. |
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Exactly. lol you've inspired me to do some 8bit (kinda) IDM. |
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i'd like to hear it when you finish it.I was thinking about doing some nes mega man or batman stuff. |
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haha yeah. yeah it's weird stuff, I'm using a couple of "C64" synths for the melodies, and using strange glitched out snappy drum synths. oh, as well as some beatboxing loops lol. |
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Cool. I like kind of strange sounding things, but the thing is, people say strange, but strange is not what I hear. |
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ok here we go... good thing you mentioned you were 14 otherwise i might suspect you to be mildly retarded. unfortuantely a lot of my review is gonna be based around the fact that you are 14, but don't worry it's not all negative. alright then let's get into it shall we? first coulple of tracks seem to be pretty aimless, wierd sounds wacky beats, no direction. but then that might be the case of you just being 14 and having no sense of musical structure. moving on, since all the tracks, like you said, are around a minute long, it tells me that again, since you are 14 you suffer from a little adhd perhaps. getting everything organized in the track and all lined up to your specifications probably took you quite a while i'm assuming and you have too much creative enrgy to focus on one track for too long it seems. that being said, considering your age, i believe, time can only tell whether this will be just a passing fad for you or if you stick with it, maybe desire will inspire you to seek out more knowledge of musical structure and history. like anything else in life if you keep at it the more you practice the better you should become, if not, hopefully it's only a fad. |
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it's not all really that bad, compared to what i made when i was 14, this is actually pretty amazing. But do try to experiment abit with composition in terms of building the track itself. They all start with a beat, then the melody comes in, beat evolves abit, melody evolves abit and then it ends... know what i mean? it's all the same, every single track. |
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Yeah, I get you. thanks for pointing that out. |
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i added you btw |
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