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what do you think? [constructive criticism appreciated] i feel it needs something else but i can't think of what. perhaps i'll never be satisfied, it's just my nature. |
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What is it you are trying to achieve? What class is it for? Its hard to give constructive criticism for something like that when you don't understand what context it is meant for. |
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pretty ugly stuff... |
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needs a little less suck. |
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the message i suppose is "stop watching tv, and go play outside, kids..." i'm trying to portray action but with camouflage effects. i was thinking perhaps adding one more thing (possibly to the left of the image), but i'm not sure if its necessary. |
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i decided to do some minor tweaking. the guy in the center was kinda buggin me. i think it looks a little better now with this new model. |
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You need to pay attention to: global light color, global illumination and aerial perspective. |
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why did you change the kid? that was the only nice thing on the pic, to me... you should have kept him and changed the rest of the things |
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mmm needs more dog? I think the photo you started with was too busy and had distracting areas like the bark of the ground. Also the colours of the original photo were flat and lifeless. I think you need a better photo of a playground maybe a silhouette of a playground on a hill with a sunset in the back ground maybe with a vibrant pinky purple through the sky or an orange like a summer's night. Then you could cut out sections of the play equipment and have a much more recognisable and dramatic effect. |
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you can't be serious |
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On the second picture, the kid as no shadow and seems to have only one leg. I'm not sure that playing outside is good for children. They might use internet in order to become more clever perhaps. |
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This is top notch. You have some awesome skills. I am, however, missing something. Maybe the kid could be running towards a land mine? Just to symbolise the danger of land mines on children's playgrounds. |
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what is psd i mean the message seems more like turn off the tv go out side and play and just get fucked up beyond recognition also make sure you look like youre not supposed to be there |
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psd is the extention-format of a photoshop file. blablablah.psd |
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melack: unfortunately i decided to stick with the second version but thanks for your input. B123: i see what you mean but its very difficult to find all those qualities in a single picture. perhaps if i had my own photography equipment i'd love to take such a project into serious consideration. this is just a minor project for class, just a bunch of ideas i've borrowed and been inspired by. i really do appreciate your vision. |
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how old are you? |
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Yeah, those considerations are of paramount importance in this instance, you truly are an expert. It's not that what we're looking at is shit, that would no more be saved by observation of global lighting or aerial perspective than it would be a swift kick to the atrophied nuts, it's important that you show off what you learnt one afternoon in your Art & Design class. |
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You have no idea how much time I've been waiting for the right opportunity to show off what I learned in one afternoon at my Art & Design class. |
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Get rid of the TV, that gives it away that it's a photoshop. |
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that and that alone |
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What I dislike about you is that you are completely stupid. |
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i meant to post this picture here. |
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I don't get it. |
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of course you don't. run along now. |
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Please explain where the fun is. |
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rah |
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It is awful! |
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Yeah, but how do you feel about Valor's picture? |
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rubbish! |
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this is still rubbish! |
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say what you will of it, but its prettier than your avatar : ) |
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no it isnt, thats just a barefaced lie. |
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what class are you taking? |
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FRAUD. |
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"intro to electronic media", its a graphics design class. |
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whats the standard of other students work like? |
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I agree with futureimage, the TV is the weakest part. |
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its only a class of about 12 students. i'd say there are probably 2 or 3 more students that i find their work to be relatively good. we're all beginners for the most part. the other class my professor teaches you can tell some students major in drawing, their self portraits came out phenomenal, especially these 2 pictures that were put up in the classroom. someone also did a great job in drawing a purse the shading work done was superb. all in all i'd say my experience was good, seeing as i'm a nursing major :). my true passion is video... i'm definitely going to spend alot of my time doing that. whenever the time deems appropriate. |
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how on earth did you make it to third level education? |
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by not spending my entire life on the internet. |
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Hey, I'm making an MP3, any tips? At the minute it sounds like "gnnnnnnar" but I am hoping in class to make quarter grade in the upcoming semifinals of Sounds Design and then majoroid in Audio Practability, I may not nothing about simple music but I'd like to dive straight into surround sound experimental harmonics and just make a kind of buzzing WHHHHAAAA that appears PSY-multaneously in your brain and about 6 meteroids behind, at the apex of the thought-eroid. |
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