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Does this sound OK for the beginning of a track? If not what sort of stuff do I have to change improve add/subtract/shoot/mame... All advices very much appreciated. href="http://www.merseyside.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/intro.mp3" Gracias. |
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Oops |
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personally i'd add some snares before those drums kick in, sounds good as it is as well though :) |
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I really like the way the Beat is Introduced, but maybe maybe maybe you should change the synth sounds, I don't like them at all (I guess they sound too cheap or something). So |
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Sorry to say I don't like this one. I normally do like your stuff though. Can't like everything though. |
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it sounds like something skinny puppy might have made in like 1977. not that that is a bad thing of course |
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I'll have a play and see. I have a thing for old sounding and FM synths at the moment. I guess I am tired of all the granulated synthesis stuff. Actually I am just bored with everything at the moment...I am sure that will pass and I'll try some other sounds before the final version :) 1977 the year of my birth :( |
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Oh and thanks for listening :) |
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I'm trying to spur creativity by limiting the tools available to me. |
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try using only microsoft windows recorder |
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it's pretty okay are you writing with max/msp again? |
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It's nice to hear your stuff again! I think the initial bell-type sounds need some tweaking to give them some richness, and maybe then they'd also match the synth stuff introduced right after that. Maybe some filter could cut it. I don't know what I'm talking about. cheers! |
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But as far as an intro is concerned it works? I can sort dynamics later, it is structurally I am concerned about at the moment. It's the first ever intro I have ever done, and while it probably sounds stupid to most of you I struggled with it. |
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I think it could work alright as an intro, but you could do better. I'm not really capable of articulating anything however =(, because everything I think of sounds ridiculously subjective bullshitty to me. Maybe I'll spit up that it could be somewhat more expansive. |
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downoading... |
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........well........... i like the beat only, i can't understand the melody at all. i don't where the track is going, do you ? i'm waiting for ver. 2, though good luck |
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"i don't where the track is going, do you ?" LOL |
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Yes. I know where is it going. I have the majority of the middle section sorted, I am doing it all in sections because it is easier that way. |
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damn you, we can use copy & paste. anyway i was expecting king crimsom hi-treble-leadguitar madness. But this sounds nicely fresh and noncomputerish i'm on the phone so i'll write something later |
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is this melody result of randomizing or is your knowledge of western music imperfect? i was somehow missing sub bass, but don't listen me on that. and about that drum stuff, dude add more variation. as is it sounds cool, but it should progress more. okay you only asked if this is good for beginning of a track. yes it is. |
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i found the entire thing to be quite corny. if it's an intro, it would have to turn into something completely different for me to like the song. sorry if it's harsh, just being honest. |
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all these bad comments have got me interested... *downloads* |
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OK I completely changed it. :P tlink: thanks for the comments...I am going to rework the whole thing. As for the melody, it wasn't a randomisation but I like melodies that sound wrong or off key or just pure shit. I always have :) |
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Oops...it's not there any more...that is a different track. |
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pants, what's this new one then? |
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An experiment I did in MAX/MSP a few months back. |
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oh shit are we talking about snapshot? YES |
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Nope, this was before snapshot...it is a more ambient thing that I got bored doing and then moved onto the beat driven struff I did with it. |
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sounds very draft7.30, me likes |
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