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The May Princess, she stands alone and young, with festal chains she throws her arms aloft; arrayed around her tender thighs are slung the wayward streams of stripy verdure soft. The golden maid revealed before the throng, her virgin flesh exposed and moist, so bare; converses sweetly with the drove in song, as moving slowly to the brook they fare. Once by the water'd bank, they praise their maid with garlands chaste, and stalks of ochre corn; thus praised and so adored, the girl cascades in to the water, drowned to be reborn. The May Princess, she gave her life to be old Nature's bride for all eternity. · 03 September 03 · |
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sonnet: 3 stanzas of 4 lines, one ending couplet. total of 14 lines. Rhyme scheme: ABAB, CDCD EFEF GG 10 syllables per line iambic pentameter (Iambus is one short vowel followe by one long vowel) |
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very nice paul, you have an excellant way with words |
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yes! i like it too. : ) besides you explained me a >[] title. |
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best sonnet anyone has ever posted on xlt. |
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only sonnet anyone has ever posted :P nah just kidding like it ! |
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yeah man it's very good! nice one |
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wow. that was really good. i'll be honest here (eep. don't stone me) and say that i haven't cared much for some of the poetry that you've posted around, but THIS...this is great. i really like this. *looks at his own shitty sonnet attempts* keep sharing with us, yeah? =] |
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yes.. your stuff has improved quite a bit, nice work mr. m. |
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thanks people - don't fret it ambsace - I don't expect everyone to like everything I do! :D I'm glad you enjoyed this tho - it took me ages to get it right! :D |
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we need another one ! |
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I have just bought a book of English Sonnets to study, and will attempt a second sonnet anon ! |
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marlowe would you mind terribly if i stole your brain? i wanna be able to write that good! mine suck... in fact my brother laughed at my last attempt at poetry... :( *wallows in mud and misery* |
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The next open space for Brain-Renting is in a little of a thousand years - up until then, I'm afraid I'm fully booked! Don't worry about your poetry being pasted by your pederast prother..(hmm).. just don't write too many clichés!! :P (I'm not saying you do - god I hope I haven't given you a complex now, I haven't even read your stuff- let me read it and tell you what I think . . oh god, now I sound patronising. must stop....GAH! |
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just who the fuck do you think you arre, the big poet man ey? btw marlowe, grreat sonnet. i was rreading some of yourr otherr poems on that allpoetry site, you have a verry distinct style, you rremind me of a poet whose name I can't rrememberr now. good job. |
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Thanks A.P. - and thanks for checking out my AP site, A.P. ! |
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