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weatheredstoner from same shit babes. (United States) on 2003-07-21 08:39 [#00788211]
Points: 12585 Status: Lurker

I have a track which is pretty much done, but I need
thoughts on the ending - I feel like something is missing
but I'm not quite sure what it is. Help me out and I kiss u.
meyeohn-qep

nlogax from oh, you must be the brains (Norway) on 2003-07-21 08:44 [#00788217]
Points: 4653 Status: Regular

I'll help.....on the other hand...

Nexus 6 from Netherlands, The on 2003-07-21 09:28 [#00788262]
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Ok, I'll ignore the the rest of the song and I'll
concentrate on the ending then. Sounds ok to me, the only
thing I would do is end with the same 'string' you used
during the whole track.

giginger from Milky Beans (United Kingdom) on 2003-07-21 09:29 [#00788266]
Points: 26326 Status: Lurker | Show recordbag

I'll try to remember to listen when I get home but I'm not
promising anything.

weatheredstoner from same shit babes. (United States) on 2003-07-21 18:40 [#00788820]
Points: 12585 Status: Lurker | Followup to Nexus 6: #00788262

interesting. I tried to end the 'string' melody in a
reasonable fashion, only to follow it up with some
soundscape-ish stuff afterwards to kinda take you away from
the half assed ending. Thanks for your input. I'll see what
I can do.

qrter from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2003-07-21 18:45 [#00788825]
Points: 47414 Status: Moderator

downloading...

weatheredstoner from same shit babes. (United States) on 2003-07-21 18:48 [#00788829]
Points: 12585 Status: Lurker | Followup to qrter: #00788825

yay! Btw I saw Leon the other day for the first time. It was
pretty good. But whats the deal with Gary Oldman character
and the pill popping? I'm not quite sure what thats all
about.

qrter from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2003-07-21 18:52 [#00788830]
Points: 47414 Status: Moderator | Followup to weatheredstoner: #00788829

uh... he's INSANE man!!!

my ordered dvd just came in last week, but I'll have to wait
for my next paycheck.. bummer.. :P

anyway.. on to the ending of your track.
personally, I would take the bassy sound at 2:39 and expand
that into at least 30 to 60 seconds more. just stretch it,
paste it, make more and more layers, to "gravel" it up, if
you will. makes a nice contrast to all the melodic stuff
before, I say.

weatheredstoner from same shit babes. (United States) on 2003-07-21 18:55 [#00788832]
Points: 12585 Status: Lurker | Followup to qrter: #00788830

I know he's INSANE! :D I love the character, but I wish they
explained the pill popping a little more. Do the pills make
him crazier or saner?

Thanks for the music input.

qrter from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2003-07-21 18:57 [#00788833]
Points: 47414 Status: Moderator | Followup to weatheredstoner: #00788832

well, my guess is he uses amphetamines of some sort. Norman
does not relax a lot.

and yes, it certainly makes him more insane. this is nothing
perscribed by a psychiatrist..

weatheredstoner from same shit babes. (United States) on 2003-07-21 19:06 [#00788846]
Points: 12585 Status: Lurker | Followup to qrter: #00788833

Makes me wonder how he got hired as a cop in the first place
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qrter from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2003-07-21 19:26 [#00788868]
Points: 47414 Status: Moderator | Followup to weatheredstoner: #00788846

his downward spiral will have been a process covering many,
many years..

weatheredstoner from same shit babes. (United States) on 2003-07-21 20:32 [#00788918]
Points: 12585 Status: Lurker | Followup to qrter: #00788868

blast!

They should make a whole movie about it.

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