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weatheredstoner
from same shit babes. (United States) on 2002-11-22 20:38 [#00452238]
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The msgboard might garble this up, but please take some time and seriously read this and tell me what you think of it.
thanks
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My world so cold and empty Succumbing to entropy Rebuild this palace with substance Of warmth and tragedy Doomed to extinction by possessions only push us further off How can I accept your gifts When you ignore my generosity Leave me to die another day Take a piece of me, throw it away
Place me into another game Partially boring, mostly insane I tire of playing cant you hear it? I'm enervated, drained spirit We could be so close, I can feel it Better to have loved and lost ...Bullshit Ever loved and never obtained? Leave me to die another way Take a piece of me, throw it away
Hate fills this void made so long ago Look at your contribution That soul you ruptured In attempt to capture a beast you created so dirty, body tainted Leave yours behind, undaunted Not your head still haunted but the vessel you flaunted
Short stories I've read come to know, never again so childish and simple Such high standards for a girl insubstantial Twist the knife giver of life and watch me bleed some more.
Is this why you're here?
Is this your purpose in life?
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Monoid
from one source all things depend on 2002-11-22 20:43 [#00452240]
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Do you like Linkin Park !?
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DonkeyRhubarb
from Saegertown, PA (United States) on 2002-11-22 20:43 [#00452241]
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that's some good shite, you wrote that yourself, stoner? i especially like the lines: "Place me into another game
Partially boring, mostly insane.." nice, good imagery =0) A+
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weatheredstoner
from same shit babes. (United States) on 2002-11-22 20:45 [#00452242]
Points: 12585 Status: Lurker | Followup to Monoid: #00452240
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No i dont like lincoln park
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weatheredstoner
from same shit babes. (United States) on 2002-11-22 20:46 [#00452244]
Points: 12585 Status: Lurker | Followup to DonkeyRhubarb: #00452241
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Thank you DonkeyRhubarb! I'm already feeling better after listening to sad sad songs and writing this.
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fleetmouse
from Horny for Truth on 2002-11-22 21:08 [#00452250]
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You'll feel better after a few weeks of spending your evenings smoking cigarettes, masturbating and crying.
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weatheredstoner
from same shit babes. (United States) on 2002-11-23 00:33 [#00452378]
Points: 12585 Status: Lurker | Followup to fleetmouse: #00452250
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It will get much worse than that. Most likely illegal drugs bought from terrorists will be involved. I'm off to go support terrorism, laters.
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C738
from Outer Space on 2002-11-23 02:29 [#00452434]
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Maybe this will help you weathered
Can anybody hear me? Cause Im standing here right now Does anybody see me? Do you care at all?
condemned into the shadows I am living like a ghost people looking straight through me is what hurts the most
the world so cold, alone is there a closed zone? around me... city streets - nomansland a hard concrete environment
depression in the air hatred trouble everywhere has everyone gone insane? has everyone lost their brain?
fear on the streets in the alleyways I remember the good old days when things werent the same before the dark clouds came
but I was just a child no knowledge of a world so wild so sick so cruel so empty and frozen is this the fate we all have chosen?
can I feel warmth can I feel love? In dark clouds the so called lord above I realize life is just a sick game play it by the rules and you end up with no name
manipulate the system and life a life like paradise manipulate the system and realize
with every breath - life's a game until your death - life's a game when things go wrong - life's a game just stand strong - life's a game
life's a game life's a game life's a game life's a game
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Cfern
from Sacto (United States) on 2002-11-23 05:14 [#00452502]
Points: 1384 Status: Lurker
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\lk;j
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glass_eater
from a blind nerves area (Switzerland) on 2002-11-23 05:24 [#00452509]
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weather : i like it, but at the end i would have just repeat is this why ur here?
instead of is this your purpose in life... just change that simple thing believe me it will do fine
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