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any sorta critique would be nice |
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The color is off, only half of the time it floats, its usually way too dry, it usually has little chunks of corn stuck in it, and it usually smells like a dead cow. Otherwise, its pretty standard as far as shit goes. |
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lol |
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lofuckingl |
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I was gonna do that when I first saw this thread, but I wouldn't have critiqued it nearly as well. |
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Ohhhh. No sleep and .nu makes taxi something something. |
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well then if yer gonna be that way about it why don;t u jus shave a urinal or something i mean come on |
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Thanks. I kinda felt a bit dissapointed in the fact that I used the word 'usually' twice. But otherwise I am pretty happy with it. |
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*thrice |
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With corrections; The color is off, it only floats about half of the time, its too dry, it typically has little chunks of corn throughout, and usually smells like a dead cow. Otherwise, its pretty standard as far as shit goes. |
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go crazy? |
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DON'T MIND IF I DO! |
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