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CS2x
from London (United Kingdom) on 2007-01-30 19:20 [#02041569]
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_The frog’s wife_
In a house there sat a frog A frog with seven legs He threw himself into a jug And fed upon some pegs
He gulped those pegs quite thoughtlessly And closed his tiny eyes Behind him crept an angry snail And stuck on him some flies
The frog growled at the rotten snail And shook off all the bugs He barfed out all those tasty pegs And grew to loathe all slugs
His wife came home and greeted him But he ignored her yell She tried in vain to shed her skin But there remained her shell
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phantom
from Chicago (United States) on 2007-01-30 19:23 [#02041571]
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ok.........................
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Gwely Mernans
from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2007-01-30 19:24 [#02041572]
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write childrens audio books. read out some of your poetry and soundtrack it with quriky happy idm. it would be amazing.
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CS2x
from London (United Kingdom) on 2007-01-30 19:27 [#02041574]
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Yes, I should write a cute little book for small child-boys and girl-childs. :-)
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Gwely Mernans
from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2007-01-30 19:29 [#02041576]
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your raison d'etre is clear.
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phantom
from Chicago (United States) on 2007-01-30 19:29 [#02041577]
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check out my new thread
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zero-cool
on 2007-01-30 19:30 [#02041578]
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fap
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Gwely Mernans
from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2007-01-30 19:32 [#02041582]
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schlick
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CS2x
from London (United Kingdom) on 2007-01-30 19:34 [#02041586]
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It's a rubbish slurp of rhino wank, that poem. I'm really quite depressed.
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Gwely Mernans
from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2007-01-30 19:36 [#02041592]
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no no.. it means something. but there remained her shell. she couldn't please her husband. this can be applied to all those broken homes and poor little foster children. write a book.
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phantom
from Chicago (United States) on 2007-01-30 19:37 [#02041595]
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ahhhh a smart one.
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CS2x
from London (United Kingdom) on 2007-01-30 19:40 [#02041600]
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Maybe you could decide the events of the next installment? You know; does he learn to accept her sluggy, grey body, or does it make him shudder with disgust for the rest of their days?
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phantom
from Chicago (United States) on 2007-01-30 19:42 [#02041606]
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ooo good question, your geting somewhere. if its a childrens story make it a happy ending.
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Gwely Mernans
from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2007-01-30 19:43 [#02041607]
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learns to accept. children books need a happy ending.
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phantom
from Chicago (United States) on 2007-01-30 19:44 [#02041611]
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glad you agree ;^)
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phantom
from Chicago (United States) on 2007-01-30 19:45 [#02041612]
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it would give a good ending moral to the story
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