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offline swift_jams from big sky on 2007-01-25 12:21 [#02038034]
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I'll Stay For You

BEST SONG I've EVER WRITTEN. I wrote the lyrics, I did the
production, I had a girl I know sing. It wasn't how I
imagined, so I had to structure a totally new rhythm and
beat around what she sent me back. This is R&B meets
electronica. I'm so excited. If I made this full length and
worked on my production a little more we could have
something hot here! PLEASE FEEDBACK.


 

offline swift_jams from big sky on 2007-01-25 12:21 [#02038036]
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I'm fucking excited.

 

offline cygnus from nowhere and everyplace on 2007-01-25 12:29 [#02038038]
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downloading!

 

offline penexpers from Toronto (Canada) on 2007-01-25 12:35 [#02038040]
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Definitely work on it, sounds nice.

 

offline swift_jams from big sky on 2007-01-25 12:38 [#02038043]
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Me and said chick definetly have some inspiration and stuff
to work on now. I don't think I've ever felt this "inspired"
to do music in my life.


 

offline penexpers from Toronto (Canada) on 2007-01-25 12:38 [#02038044]
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Congrats

 

offline dog_belch from Netherlands, The on 2007-01-25 12:40 [#02038046]
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I wanted to be rude and say the singing sounded like a small
boy trapped in a cupboard but the song is actually quite
nice.

Also, I think R&B already is R&B meets Electronica. It's
like saying RocknRoll meets the Blues. Or Trip Hop meets Hip
Hop.


 

offline swift_jams from big sky on 2007-01-25 12:42 [#02038047]
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Call me a bum, but I don't listen to popular stuff. So I
don't really think of R&B as sounding that way. I don't hear
modern stuff because I don't pay attention. I'm thinking of
older R&B. But you're right. I want to push the envelope on
the "electronica" part though. even though this doesn't come
close to doing that.


 

offline ecnadniarb on 2007-01-25 12:58 [#02038053]
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I was all ready to have a go at you being big
headed...however, having listened to the track, everything
you typed is fully justified. That girls vocals are fucking
great, the mood of the track is fucking great, and yes, if
you worked it into a full length track it could be really
fucking special.

Lovely stuff.

 

offline swift_jams from big sky on 2007-01-25 12:59 [#02038055]
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Don't talk to ME about full length tracks. :D

Thanks! I'll need to write some more lyrics, get her a
program to record more than 30 seconds with, and work out
some better "instrument" stuff. And it'll be a hit!


 

offline hanal from k_maty only (United Kingdom) on 2007-01-25 13:02 [#02038057]
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im gonna have to give this a big thumbs up.
well done.

 

offline swift_jams from big sky on 2007-01-25 13:09 [#02038061]
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I want to give you a big thumbs up too, only someplace eles.
:D


 

offline Drunken Mastah from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2007-01-25 14:26 [#02038089]
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put the vocals more up front, but otherwise awesome! make it
a full length, but I say keep the space where you end it now
and make it hit slightly harder when it comes back!

have it done by the 10th of next month and I'll play it at a
party!


 

offline swift_jams from big sky on 2007-01-25 14:47 [#02038099]
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DEAL!!!

 

offline Drunken Mastah from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2007-01-25 14:56 [#02038101]
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today we were the satanic cult of mikado
Attached picture

 

offline staz on 2007-01-25 14:58 [#02038103]
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i don't like it very much but i am a terrible person i guess

 

offline Brisk from selling smack at the orphanage on 2007-01-25 15:06 [#02038109]
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Sounds neat! The ravey-stabs work well with the vocals but
as mentioned earlier, I do think the vox need to be brought
forward in the mix a bit more.

But still, I like it. Definitely develop it.

 

offline rogu rarebit from beggin' for leggings on 2007-01-25 15:29 [#02038119]
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Linky no worky.

 

offline Dannn_ from United Kingdom on 2007-01-25 15:32 [#02038123]
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It sounds good. dunno if its her shitty mic or whether you
EQed the vocal track but I think the singing deserves more
low freqs. Finish it tho! It can be a fatal mistake to share
it too early


 

offline evolume from seattle (United States) on 2007-01-25 19:20 [#02038171]
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I think it isn't very good. Not sure what everyone else is
hearing in this, maybe my tastes are waaaay off. I think
it could use some more music layers. the vocals are too
muffled and tinny. the beats are boring and too simple. i
mean a kick a snare and a hat? how bout 1 or 2 more drum
layers. I guess it could be the start of something better
with a lot more production, but right now, i'm not
impressed.


 

offline cygnus from nowhere and everyplace on 2007-01-25 21:37 [#02038186]
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my tastes do not line up w/ the track, but its good

 

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