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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-10-19 18:47 [#01989634]
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much slower, i think. first song ive done like this. tell me what you think! close your eyes
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isnieZot
from pooptown (Belgium) on 2006-10-20 01:17 [#01989715]
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you could still cut down on some bmp's imo. should be even slower.
I like it. however. maybe you could have more variation in your lead melody instead of just transposing it. the hi-hats in the back aren't really needed. and neither are the beat repeats in the end.
but it's ok :)
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dariusgriffin
from cool on 2006-10-20 02:49 [#01989731]
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This is very good, but why did you feel the need to make it go to shit after 2:56?
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Drunken Mastah
from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2006-10-20 03:38 [#01989739]
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I like it!
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-10-20 10:17 [#01989913]
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i dunno i just sort of dug that effect and how it affected the tracks, bruoght em together and sort of made them all jacked up.. its what i was goin for. thakns for listening guys
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Mr Brazil
from Oh Joan, I love you so... on 2006-10-20 21:30 [#01990335]
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Nice track Cygnus. You actually have some notes in this one. Two things that might have helped out a little in my opinion:
There's somthing about the production that sounds "thin". It's not...full enough. (?) Maybe better production values.
Also, as isnieZot stated, there's not enough variation. Take your motif through a couple chord changes maybe.
Besides that, I think it's a good track. Your music is continually getting better. Keep at it.
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JivverDicker
from my house on 2006-10-20 21:51 [#01990339]
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actual LOL! thin, production values, continually getting better!
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NannouV4
from United States on 2006-10-20 22:34 [#01990345]
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shit's tight.
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-10-20 22:58 [#01990350]
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jibberdicker;even tho you probably dont want to listen to it again id like to know what you honestly thought about the tune
brazil: you know what? i agree so fucking much, i just have no idea how to get the sound out of software that i can out of the hardware i have. just, hOW? is it just the sound card or am i just using EQ shittily?
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-10-20 22:59 [#01990351]
Points: 11920 Status: Regular | Followup to JivverDicker: #01990339
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unless you thought it was pure shit then i could go w/out that but still thanks for d/l'ing and listening to it.
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-10-20 23:07 [#01990352]
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i do not even know what the dimension is that i'm talking about - is it dynamics? is it just VSTs? i never want to use a VST again,
i used the midi from this track and sent it to my nord lead, and used 4 patches that i really felt- and, for christs sake it was so much better even for how simple the shit is. i feel like an idiot, if its not EQ that makes sounds full and rich and, i dont know, "warm, liquid", what is it? im stupid
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oyvinto
on 2006-10-20 23:55 [#01990357]
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i'll give it a shot when sound is back
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oyvinto
on 2006-10-20 23:56 [#01990358]
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ps sound is gone
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oyvinto
on 2006-10-20 23:56 [#01990359]
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triple bonus post
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