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ok new track, available . its a little bit cheesey in places, but if you're down with that, cool. enjoy folks. any feedback always welcome. cheers. |
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shit |
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that's not very constructive, you goat. And the track isn't shit. |
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"IMO" |
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yapanese melody bells distorted guitar drums* (whos the punk girl with sunglasses?) |
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was thinking it was sounding like tangerine dream the drums need work, they sound a bit too dry and need to sound more live. I think you need to play around with the dynamics a bit, it does get a bit stale after 2 minutes, sound is kinda flat, needs widening. make this a bit more energetic and live sounding and it will be awesome. I really like this, but it is really spoilt by the cleaness of everything. listen to a live recording and make it sound like that. i think fake crowd noise would help too. i think maybe it needs more of a minimal bit just before the final bit and make the ending a bit more epic. i like it so far, but its a bit of a rough diamond. |
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i hear you, thanks for the pointers. and yes the drums do sound to clean, and the whole track does need a bit of punch to it. i'm no good at mastering though, so could be a bit of a problem. hmm |
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Or maybe you should just give up. "IMO" |
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This really wants to make me play Ace Combat or some other flight combat situation game from the late 90's. :] |
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bump. |
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make internet fun, please |
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what's the deal with the double snare? is it idm2? and can you please yousendit mer what the beat, as i've searched my whole computer without finding it. 3> |
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thank god |
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the track is progressive and cool the drums make it rule, i wonder like oyvinto about some double snares and also kicks, they sounded unrealistic, and that's not nicely cheesy when you go out of your way with drum solo's |
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maybe you should work on the whole sound making it less electronic and more rock |
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light7 pwns swears's asshole, lolz0rz. i havent heard it yet though. browser crashes. must be too good for my bandwidth |
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i win |
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haha swears made me laugh 4 times in this topic. The track sound kind of gay. Like stock music from a really bad computer game. I got bored half way through and stopped listening so my review only applies to the beginning, although my guess is you pretty much finish with more of the same. |
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thanks for digging this out the archive |
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Just trying to catch up on spam I missed. |
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i would take about a minute out of the beginning of this, it's a bit too much of the same thing.. the breakdown is good, i like the wandering synth you bring in. the one-two-one-two-three-four melody of that high-pitched synth really needs more variation. i like the echoing drum style, for the most part it works well. overall, i don't mind the somewhat dated sound design, it reminds me of a game called 'rock and roll racing'.. the ending especially. with some editing here and there, this could become a pretty solid track. |
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nice intro, if thats not a sample youve done well. and good sampling if it is a sample i spose. but i hate that double snare thing when the drums come in, its horrible. overall the drums are a bit clean. Actually dont like much of the drum patterns, but its quite a nicely structured track. fade out ending? never let that happen again |
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fuck convention |
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lol |
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lol, swears, dweeb |
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I listened again, I really like this track. Is it possible for me to remix/rework/tweak it ? If you could send me the multitrack wav files that would be ace, I'd love to add/change a few bits in this, that is, if it's ok with you. I was listening to Tangerine Dream live in the Dominion 1982 earlier and this track reminds me of that quite a lot, it's got a nice live feel to it. Anyway, I've got a few days off work and not much to do, so why not? Also the "hole in the sky" is good as well. I think I have the 'white label' version on my pc. The one I have is called untitled(23).mp3, hopefully it is a rare collectors version, which I can flog on ebay in a few years ;) |
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swears' second reply made lol. |
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bumpage for mr i_x_ten |
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lol, um as for reworking the track, yeah maybe i dunno yet... i still wanna tidy a few things up on it myself, but i'll get back to you on that one. glad you like it tho and the other one as well :) |
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