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         |  swift_jams
             from big sky on 2006-06-01 10:13 [#01911240] Points: 7577 Status: Lurker
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 | Should I layer either acoustic guitar or something else over this, what o you, the audience think?
 
 Sillyfuntimeworms
 
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         |  Falito
             from Balenciaga  on 2006-06-01 10:17 [#01911244] Points: 3974 Status: Lurker | Show recordbag
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 | yeah it works:) 
 
 
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         |  Falito
             from Balenciaga  on 2006-06-01 10:22 [#01911249] Points: 3974 Status: Lurker | Show recordbag
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 | this is sweet like nutella,great job 
 
 
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         |  swift_jams
             from big sky on 2006-06-01 10:40 [#01911284] Points: 7577 Status: Lurker | Followup to Falito: #01911249
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 | Thanks meng. :) 
 
 
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         |  DirtyPriest
             from Copenhagen (Denmark) on 2006-06-01 11:40 [#01911348] Points: 5499 Status: Lurker
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 | Dowloading 
 
 
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         |  Dannn_
             from United Kingdom on 2006-06-01 11:59 [#01911367] Points: 7877 Status: Lurker
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 | nice. goes on a bit too long maybe. its very simple but i guess thats part of the charm, i would think about adding
 some background noise like muffled speech or seagulls and
 waves crashing, or something less cheesy. I would remove the
 drum track at the end and let finish on the melody.
 
 
 
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         |  swift_jams
             from big sky on 2006-06-01 12:05 [#01911373] Points: 7577 Status: Lurker
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 | I was thinking the exact same thing, a birdsong, but I don't know where i'd find a track of that at. Then the acoustic
 part over that, soft finger plucking. And you're right,
 drums stop, melody goes on to end, but the synth melody
 fades out and the guitar part ultimately fades in and
 climaxes at the end with the birdsong.
 
 I just may have a decent song.
 
 
 
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         |  swift_jams
             from big sky on 2006-06-01 12:07 [#01911375] Points: 7577 Status: Lurker
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 | Maybe even whistling. 
 
 
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         |  DirtyPriest
             from Copenhagen (Denmark) on 2006-06-01 12:07 [#01911376] Points: 5499 Status: Lurker | Followup to swift_jams: #01911284
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 | Its nice. Its a nice little melody, but it feels like its going nowhere. I need some evolving. I'm not into tracks
 that keeps getting layers added, and then just stops. I need
 some musical evolvement. The high pitch synth is nice, but
 the other one is a simsynth preset :=
 
 In the words of cygnus and ltj bukem, this certainly lacks
 BASS. It could do with some more dirtyness, distortion.
 Instead of ending the track, start it up again, even more
 powerfull with strings, different melody lines and some
 vocals, that would be the shit!
 
 I dont dislike it, but i have to be honest and say that i
 liked some of your other stuff a lot better (Especially
 those tracks you did with a singer)
 
 
 
 
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