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swift_jams
from big sky on 2006-06-01 10:13 [#01911240]
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Should I layer either acoustic guitar or something else over this, what o you, the audience think?
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Falito
from Balenciaga on 2006-06-01 10:17 [#01911244]
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yeah it works:)
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Falito
from Balenciaga on 2006-06-01 10:22 [#01911249]
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this is sweet like nutella,great job
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swift_jams
from big sky on 2006-06-01 10:40 [#01911284]
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Thanks meng. :)
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DirtyPriest
from Copenhagen (Denmark) on 2006-06-01 11:40 [#01911348]
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Dowloading
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Dannn_
from United Kingdom on 2006-06-01 11:59 [#01911367]
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nice. goes on a bit too long maybe. its very simple but i guess thats part of the charm, i would think about adding some background noise like muffled speech or seagulls and waves crashing, or something less cheesy. I would remove the drum track at the end and let finish on the melody.
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swift_jams
from big sky on 2006-06-01 12:05 [#01911373]
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I was thinking the exact same thing, a birdsong, but I don't know where i'd find a track of that at. Then the acoustic part over that, soft finger plucking. And you're right, drums stop, melody goes on to end, but the synth melody fades out and the guitar part ultimately fades in and climaxes at the end with the birdsong.
I just may have a decent song.
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swift_jams
from big sky on 2006-06-01 12:07 [#01911375]
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Maybe even whistling.
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DirtyPriest
from Copenhagen (Denmark) on 2006-06-01 12:07 [#01911376]
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Its nice. Its a nice little melody, but it feels like its going nowhere. I need some evolving. I'm not into tracks that keeps getting layers added, and then just stops. I need some musical evolvement. The high pitch synth is nice, but the other one is a simsynth preset :=
In the words of cygnus and ltj bukem, this certainly lacks BASS. It could do with some more dirtyness, distortion. Instead of ending the track, start it up again, even more powerfull with strings, different melody lines and some vocals, that would be the shit!
I dont dislike it, but i have to be honest and say that i liked some of your other stuff a lot better (Especially those tracks you did with a singer)
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