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Space Kids! |
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it seems like it could be a tshirt. I give it a C+ |
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it's cute, the letters are cute |
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Would be a nice shirt indeed: B. |
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You're cute. |
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Nice one mate! |
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nice! but i'd had a kid in a astronaut suite |
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4/5 I think the feathering on the suit could have been placed and drawn more carefully so that it doesn't look like a photoshop filter. |
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funny ;-) |
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we dont actually need to review every little fucking piece you create dont we? |
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Your original design was close to perfection, but after careful consideration of the elements of design, I was able to improve upon it. My main concern was the balance of the image as a whole. I felt perhaps the image of the spaceman was a tad too low and the text maybe a little too high; in other words, I felt that the area could have been used more efficiently. Now look carefully at my changes I have posted in the image below. You may not notice them at first, but don't let that become frustration - look more closely. I'm sure you'll see, after some time, that I have, in fact, moved the spaceman up higher to get rid of some of that unsightly open space. In order to compensate for the new open space at the bottom, I have also elongated the spaceman's legs - this change, if I do say so myself, was brilliant in its simplicity. Now, the composition is perfect. You need not credit me for my help. |
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wow that is the sign of a true design professional. you looked at the situation, considered the information and acted accordingly. With positive results once more, good job. PS. I like the original image/idea. Very appealing. |
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