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to u0n2t2. yan_g industries thank you for your cooperation :) |
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great production and sounds, but the melodies were too meandering, not at all striking, but, you know, that's just, like, my opinion, man, 6/10 |
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thx for listening, what does "meandering" mean? |
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come on peeps, i think i found a cheese/normal mix that is unheard before! |
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Its well produced, but to me it sounds like the beat part and melodical part have different moods. But maybe it`s just synth sound i don`t like. Hmm. Maybe try to add some different (and really simple) instrument/motive that leads through the song? Overall its really well done. Good job. hma |
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I like the melody more then the drums in this track, im just kinda tired of all these "idm beats", but they sound well mixed and all so. Perhaps some more extreme pitch changes + tempo changes would make the beats more attention grabbing and less repeitive.. I also prefer the first 2 minutes of the melody, it's really nice and it feels like it's going somewhere even better, but but it sort of turns out to become a bit more messy, I find myself losing focus on the melody after a couple of minutes.. Perhaps you should try sticking more to the earlyer parts of the melody and just develope it carefully while adding some more sounds ? Ow yeah, I also like the ending thing that you do, you sort of end the track, then after it finished on a good note you brought the beats back in, it worked really well and I could even see that you finish the track earlyer like that, then bring it back in with a bunch of new sounds or something and then play on that for a minute or two, im sure im not making any sense.. morning tired. Nice spam. good job |
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it is good and i like it. but why is it still "in progress" ? about 5 minutes is enough for such a track i think, if not too much. |
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as usual your tracks are amazing ! |
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I enjoy the FXed beat and, at first, the melody -- but, as Sam said, they meander after awhile. enjoyable track though. |
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very good track |
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thx all for the input, haven't listened to it for 1 week (was on holiday), will play it again in a bit so i know what you're talking abuot ;) |
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in progress because i'm not too happy with the bass and because there are some things to change in the structure imo. |
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i like the rhythm elements of this a lot. kind of heavy - nice production. i don't really like video game-ish melodies in general, so the melodies aren't really doing it for me. actually, the part when it gets crazy (about 3:00 in) would be great if that was the first place you heard these drowning mouse carnival sounds. |
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i'm not sure i get what sounds you're talking about... |
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the track's finished. i added some mess where it was too messy and changed some bits in the bass and levels here and there. tell me what you think! |
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webpage fixed. link is now working :) |
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