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DaggerHappy
from Australia on 2005-08-07 06:30 [#01686590]
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Hi, I made a track recently which you can download here. Can some people listen and give some feedback bout it?
thanx
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hanal
from k_maty only (United Kingdom) on 2005-08-07 06:37 [#01686594]
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hello mr daggerhappy.not bad at all,not overkeen on the ending but the tracks fine:)
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E-man
from Rixensart (Belgium) on 2005-08-07 06:41 [#01686596]
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needs a lot more work but it could be worth it, the main synth and the beat mainly are not punchy and fat enough :p
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2005-08-07 06:51 [#01686604]
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this is mixed weird.. the beaty kind of stuff upfront and the melody somewhere in the back.
I don't like the synth sounds - I just don't like that darkbrown "ooh I'm constipated"-kind of sound the track begins with.
I kind of liked the percussion, until that dnb-like thingy came in. that's really overused and generally makes anything you make sound instantly generic, I think.
I think things would sound better if you tried mixing it differently.
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colani
from Retarded (France) on 2005-08-07 07:05 [#01686612]
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I want to say you it's good, cause you spent a lot of time on it, loving the way it sounds. (I think)
But, I think you have no future in music, like 99.9999 percents of the guys making music.
I like it, though. (your track, not your failure)
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hedphukkerr
from mathbotton (United States) on 2005-08-07 08:53 [#01686672]
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a fine track, but as said before, needs better mixing. there isnt nearly enough bass to hold the high end together, and it just end up sounding like the beat is just skipping along instead of really driving the song (as precussive heavy song be).
also, yeah that bass synth in the beginning is way cheesy, try someting a little softer/less saw-ish.
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_gvarek_
from next to you (Poland) on 2005-08-07 09:37 [#01686689]
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I liked it, nice richard d. james album-like beats, nice backgound, solid basseline.
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r40f
from qrters tea party on 2005-08-07 09:56 [#01686706]
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are you the aphex twin?
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thatne
from United States on 2005-08-07 09:59 [#01686709]
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I am the child of the trespasser.
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hanal
from k_maty only (United Kingdom) on 2005-08-07 10:08 [#01686712]
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obara
from Utrecht on 2005-08-07 10:14 [#01686715]
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hello ! i don't like the track. i can't find any idea behind it, it's a bit of a mess.
can you post another one ?
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