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somejerk
from south florida, US (United States) on 2004-12-27 10:08 [#01437203]
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hi, i did this in fruity loops in a matter of a few hours. i'd like to thank the bud-brownie i ate that inspired this. it's called 'crystal lake', because that's what i was thinking about when i made it - a frozen mass of water.
here's the track, let me know what i can do to improve it/finish it. one person suggested using female vocals somewhere. hmm...
crystal lake, ver.3
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somejerk
from south florida, US (United States) on 2004-12-27 10:09 [#01437204]
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oh yeah, and if you have the time, i have a few more tracks up in that same directory (http://www.patternawareness.org/mp3/newersongs)
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ecnadniarb
on 2004-12-27 10:10 [#01437208]
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"here's the track, let me know what i can do to improve it/finish it. one person suggested using female vocals somewhere. hmm..."
I suggested adding a delete key, then a right click in the recycle bin, and maybe an Empty in there as there.
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somejerk
from south florida, US (United States) on 2004-12-27 10:13 [#01437214]
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you didn't even listen to it
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ecnadniarb
on 2004-12-27 10:16 [#01437219]
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hehe I am listening to it now :)
It's pretty good. Nice and laid back. I quite like the beats, I like the bass. There are certain sections that I'm not a massive fan of. Changes in the bass are a bit too expected. I can't see a female vocal fitting in there. It's sounds pretty good the way it is though. I wouldn't know what to recommend to change it.
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somejerk
from south florida, US (United States) on 2004-12-27 10:18 [#01437225]
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thanks for listening this time, haha.
i think i need to add another change in the melody, especially i the bassline. i've been trying to work more with melodies and less with beats, as i tend to concentrate on the beats and take them too far to fit a melody/groove in.
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somejerk
from south florida, US (United States) on 2004-12-27 13:24 [#01437438]
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bumppp
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yann_g
from now on 2004-12-27 17:13 [#01437657]
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nice... i think there should be something else when the melody disappears near 2:20... maybe some more rhythm sounds or something, dunno...
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somejerk
from south florida, US (United States) on 2004-12-28 07:48 [#01437998]
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thanks yann_g, i'll take that into consideration.
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2004-12-28 09:01 [#01438066]
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This is very good. The beats are nice and same goes for the backing synth. It feels like it should be in a video game or something. Good Job!
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somejerk
from south florida, US (United States) on 2004-12-28 09:03 [#01438071]
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thanks!!
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