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ChildrenTalking
from United States on 2004-09-29 00:16 [#01347346]
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just incase anyones interested. warning its not entirely what i want it to sound like structurely, its a rough draft if you will. the sfx aren't what i wanted to primarily use either but i believe what i wanted to personify in the song is attainable after a few listens. comments are welcomed and thanks for listening.
CitoPlus
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evolume
from seattle (United States) on 2004-09-29 01:37 [#01347364]
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it's rough i agree but it sounds like big iron robots walking around in the arctic! if it were my track, i'd add some more 'color' like maybe some higher pitched sparkly sounds or wind-chimey stuff! or some subtle synth-paddy stuff but it aint my track so you do your thing guy!
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ChildrenTalking
from United States on 2004-09-29 11:33 [#01347834]
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thanks i definitely should add more distinguishable sounds.
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2004-09-29 13:23 [#01348045]
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hmm, it's very experimental. I did seem to get bored quite quickly, but there wasn't really enough to keep me interested. I'm not really sure what you were going for so I can't really comment further.
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ecnadniarb
on 2004-09-29 14:04 [#01348117]
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sorry tuti, I didnt think too much of it. It sounds like you are trying to imitate ae but going the wrong way about it.
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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2004-09-29 14:24 [#01348161]
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Please return favour :)
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ChildrenTalking
from United States on 2004-09-29 14:28 [#01348179]
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ae are who i look upto and you can tell - its highly influenced by their sound. that be the case its very difficult i agree to emulate those two. i'm trying my best to make something enjoyable but also thought provoking. i'll see what i can come up because its extremely difficult especially since i'm only working with samples not custom made sounds. i'm in no rush really theres alot of space for improvement. thanks for the input :)
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yann_g
from now on 2004-09-29 14:45 [#01348207]
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u got a lomohome children?
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ChildrenTalking
from United States on 2004-09-29 14:55 [#01348225]
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no russian camera's here :)
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jkd
from Twitch City (Canada) on 2004-09-29 23:08 [#01348619]
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imagine "autechre unplugged". they play their songs without computers, by rubbing microphones against stuff. that's what this sounds like. :)
can't say i really enjoy listening to it much though.. it doesn't really have much rhythm or melody, the two things i enjoy the most about music.
it's an interesting experiment however..
sorry for being so negative. i just thought i'd be brutally honest.
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2004-09-29 23:20 [#01348624]
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there is little structure, or at least not a very interesting one. the sounds are hardly interesting either. the progression doesn't go anywhere if there is any.
it doesn't leave much to comment upon. this sounds as just one layer in what could be a track. to call it a track on it's own makes me think you should work longer on your music, maybe you're to eager to have something finished that you can call a "track".
another piece of advice: try listening to a lot more "avant-garde" electronic music, anything from Stockhausen to older Hafler Trio, things on labels like Sub Rosa and x-or.
you could pick up a lot about sounddesign and structure from stuff like that - from what I've heard of your music uptil now I get the feeling that you have little real background in the music you're trying to make, which can work great, but in your case it maybe hindering you.
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Gwely Mernans
from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-09-29 23:30 [#01348630]
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what the fuck was that, put a melody on it
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Gwely Mernans
from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2004-09-29 23:40 [#01348634]
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what the hells with you and old ladies
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zaphod
from the metaverse on 2004-09-29 23:45 [#01348638]
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i really wouldn't qualify that as a track. or music.
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ChildrenTalking
from United States on 2004-09-29 23:49 [#01348639]
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jkd its perfectly fine to criticize. i'm just as harsh to myself in the working process. so i'd like to know what you the listener gets out of the experience. i need to know because the creator will always be biased.
gwely i'm not going to put a melody any time soon so dont hold your breath =) i'm primarily just working on percussion.
-thanks for listening
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qrter
from the future, and it works (Netherlands, The) on 2004-10-01 06:43 [#01349697]
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Sam does look a bit like an old lady, doesn't he.
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