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ok working on a tracj this is what i ahve so far can u let me know what you think please? |
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Love the drums, and the rest of it as well actually... it sounds great. There is room for adding extra elements (if that's what you're considering) but it's not in need of them. |
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cool cheers think i need to add something with more motion to it give it some more variation its a bit too static cheers for the feedback you'll ahve to come to my live show (if i can find somewhere in canters to book me) |
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it's a nice track, but as you say: "motion." if you use one instrument to "drag" the other one along, in a way.. use another instrument to play the same as the first one, but different, if you know what I mean..? probably not, but try anyway. |
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Yeah, needs variation and more layers. I thought it sounded very Fruityloops-y, has potential though. |
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fruity loops y :'( <-- tears of sadness ive hadded a few lil things to the background ambience im gonna try and loosen up the drums |
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i like the textures at the beginning, and the drum work is quite good. i'd recommend adding some intermittent (yet subtle) glitch-like variants to the drums, like a drill bit or a triplet or a few short phased bits - something to add a bit of "flavor" to it, but nothing too terribly extreme, as that could ruin the mood of the track. i do agree though, some variants in the melodic intrumentation would be welcomed. however, aside from my suggestions, i thought the track was solid, and it's a very good start. i enjoyed it, hope to you in finishing it. |
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Wicked pads and drums. I'd add a sub layer of drums with some more hi-hatty motion. The pads are really well done. Kudos |
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yeah, i also thought so. i like those synths A LOT - very much so, i just feel that some more instrumentation needs to enter somewhere. |
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