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oscillik
from the fires of orc on 2004-05-31 07:17 [#01216204]
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...and refine? or should i let it die.
You Look So Fine
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r40f
from qrters tea party on 2004-05-31 07:21 [#01216211]
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yeah, why not? it's pretty good, i think.
btw, "let it die" is a rather good song by the heroine sheiks
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Zeus
from San Francisco (United States) on 2004-05-31 07:22 [#01216213]
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very nice. I like where it goes, esp at about the halfway mark. I think you should at least give it a proper ending! I like the title too, it fits it. I can see some sexy lady walking, and being totally mesmerized by her.
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oscillik
from the fires of orc on 2004-05-31 07:23 [#01216214]
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thanks :)
yet another cover i'm working on....hopefully my girlfriend will do vocals, because i just tried and i sound terrible.
just checked out that page...hehe
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Zeus
from San Francisco (United States) on 2004-05-31 07:23 [#01216217]
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*maybe proper wasnt the right word. I just think a less abrupt ending would fit it better.
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oscillik
from the fires of orc on 2004-05-31 07:24 [#01216219]
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yeh, i'm about halfway through with it.
i'm thinking about toying around with the structure a little too, although i think it's working so far with the original structure intact.
btw, for those who don't know the original, it's by Garbage
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Zeus
from San Francisco (United States) on 2004-05-31 07:27 [#01216225]
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ohhh its a cover. which album?
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oscillik
from the fires of orc on 2004-05-31 07:27 [#01216227]
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Version 2.0
last track on that album :)
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ecnadniarb
on 2004-05-31 08:00 [#01216257]
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You need to work on some original material. What you have done is quite impressive so far, but reatively I think you would acheive more by working on your own stuff. Finish this though because I would be interested to hear the final outcome.
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oscillik
from the fires of orc on 2004-05-31 08:07 [#01216262]
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yeh i know, i'm kinda getting stuck in a rut of churning out covers (which i never really intended to do)
i think the whole honkytonk debacle knocked me back a bit too, but i am trying to come up with some totally original stuff.
What i'd really like to do is start working with a band, or do some collaborative work with another electronic based artist. I think that it'd help me get a bit more creative.
Thanks for the swift kick though :) I really do need to start making some original stuff
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oscillik
from the fires of orc on 2004-06-02 13:44 [#01219880]
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ok, well i've pretty much completed the base of it.
at least it's the full length now.
any comments appreciated :)
LAZY_TITLE
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oscillik
from the fires of orc on 2004-06-02 14:08 [#01219910]
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oh yeh, i forgot to mention - vocals aren't added yet, and it does need a bit of polishing, but otherwise it's definitely listenable
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oscillik
from the fires of orc on 2004-06-02 15:30 [#01219984]
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anyone care to listen? :)
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nobsmuggler
from silly mid-off on 2004-06-02 16:14 [#01220049]
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ive d/l but cant listen atm
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oscillik
from the fires of orc on 2004-06-02 16:15 [#01220050]
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ah, thank you kindly sir :)
btw, cool av
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nobsmuggler
from silly mid-off on 2004-06-02 16:24 [#01220069]
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thanks i stole it from a gif site
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oscillik
from the fires of orc on 2004-06-02 16:25 [#01220070]
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i stole mine from a Macintosh icon designer ;)
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ecnadniarb
on 2004-06-02 17:03 [#01220105]
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teapot drew my avatar, personally for me from a spanish descripition of me supplied by horsefactory.
Not back oswillik...not bad at all...still needs vocals...what drum samples are you using there?
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oscillik
from the fires of orc on 2004-06-02 17:10 [#01220120]
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thank you very much :)
i'd supply my own vocals, but i really can't sing for shit - i'm hoping that my girlfriend will still do vocals for it though, and i'll get them down as soon as possible, but it looks like i'll be using the built in mic on my PowerBook for them until i can get some time in a studio. She may be able to get the vocals recorded at her college though :)
I'm using a 909 kit, some drum samples from misc refills and i'm using the funkydrummer break
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ecnadniarb
on 2004-06-02 17:12 [#01220127]
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Dirty the tune up a it, and then use low quality distorted vocals over it. I think it could work really well.
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oscillik
from the fires of orc on 2004-06-02 17:15 [#01220136]
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dirty the tune up............which part of the melody?
the bass line, piano line, pads, or all of it? heh
yeah, i'm thinking of putting some bit cruisher or chopper on the vox....it depends on the vocals...they might be ok clean :)
i'm really happy with the growling bassline though
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oscillik
from the fires of orc on 2004-06-06 08:56 [#01225062]
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*bumpage*
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oscillik
from the fires of orc on 2004-06-06 13:16 [#01225488]
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i am hungry for comments on this track, thank you please
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ecnadniarb
on 2004-06-06 17:51 [#01225850]
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Troll.
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big
from lsg on 2004-06-07 03:15 [#01226306]
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cool
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