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I have a new track up that I think is pretty good. Would anyone give me some criticism? Also two new tracks there as well. Thank you in advance for listening. |
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*listening* nice playful melodies |
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thankee sai! :D |
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Hmm... I LOVE the playful melodies so much and the singing. Not a big fan of the ring mod mayhem though. |
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i like the bit with vocals before the bassbeat comes in.....but then i reckon the bass is too full on and it doesnt sound right to me..... "whos that guy..." |
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So you think this track is pretty good do you? Well I've got news for you bud, you're wrong. This track ain't good, it's totally fucking awesome! Love the funfair style organ playing at the beginning. What are the words being said in this? Those loud, noisy distorted beats are a bit too loud compared to the rest of the track (maybe i'll just turn my speakers down), but overall I like it muchly. |
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you cant trust a man whos a governor and you cant trust me you cant trust a man with a gun at all and you cant trust me |
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ha ha glad people like it. here are the lyrics: who's that guy all alone? it's sad and lonely me. who's that guy without a match? it's sad and lonely me. who's that guy alone in the corner? it's sad and lonely me. who's that guy looking so distraught? it's sad and lonely me. |
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Are you feeling lonely by any chance Gus? |
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this track seems interesting and i like your zebox layout, it kinda scares me, im dowloading right naaw |
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hehehe this song is really funny and you know it =) the melody is really funny, makes me think of some old kid show stuff on tv but i cant think of one exact. the beat is also funny and "BIG" sounding wichs suits the melody very very nice. It's a really nice track but i dont dare to say that it is the type of track that i could listen to for a long time or to many times. i will keep it in my "xltronic" collection thou. Good job |
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thank you sir. and yes mr. jazembo, the machine man is quite the lonely one. |
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darn-larding,,.. |
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i like the cute parts better than the noisey parts. i wish the vox were more prominent. good mastering i think except i hear some clipping or something during the noisey parts, maybe that's intentional. but other than that it sounds clean, or, more polished than some of your other stuff. not really my "bag" but good i 'spect for peeps into this kind of music. |
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yay! glad you understand. yeah, the noise is meant to be ungodly. as i've always said, i enjoy contrasts in my music. anyways, thanks for listening / understanding. :D |
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hmmm.... anyone else? :D |
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got the blue screen. redownloading.. ARGh. |
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Checking. |
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Interesting. Can't say its my thing, I may change my mood though. Certainly I know an Oddio track when I hear it though. You've got that customary 8-bit crunchiness to everything you do. I agree with the others I think the timestretch/noise element on the drums is too noisy over powers the rest of the music. Also a bit more variation in the melody would go down a treat. |
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YOU'RE ALWAYS DRUNK |
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It sounds quite fresh but as its already been pointed out the drum levels need a tinkering . twas very nice though . |
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Nah I'm just feeling a bit zonked. Funny though I am feeling like alcohol is in my body even though I haven't drunk anything. |
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Otherr than thee ehh drrum levels... it's nice. |
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Cant you give us a direct link to the mp3, most people are to lazy to visit your zebox site |
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I don't feel I'm in the best mood to judge stuff. I'm listening to some other Oddio stuff and they're some nice funky beats and novel elements going on in them. My main criticisms would be the music bogs some of the tracks down a bit too much. The music could do with a serious lift in particular tracks. Of your recent tracks 'bargain bin electric angst' is my favourite. The beats in your tracks are definitely the strongest element for me. |
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thank you for your honest criticism. what do you suggest i do with the drums? |
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bumpsies for now. |
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ashit. i forgot about commenting on this. and now i can't seem to locate the file. well, if it means anything, i remember liking it when i listened a few days ago. |
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listening to frantic footsteps love the bass, it's massive gonna listen to the others when this one is done nice work so far mate :) |
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machine mans lament isnt there? |
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yojimbo is the fucking bomb! :) |
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i quite liked that track too, cept for the 'voice' in the middle. |
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this is an old thread someone bumped. i actually had a thread dedicated to the new tracks, but i'll go ahead and use this one since it's here. Gondola of Love is very similar to Machine's Man Lament, though. |
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I like that yojimbo song, freakin nice |
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thank you! i'm glad some people are actually enjoying it, cause i do too! |
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ill d/l all three i cant say when ill listen though :) |
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take your time. i'm in no rush. :D |
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