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corticalstim
from Canada on 2003-12-09 18:07 [#00983951]
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i just recently wrote this piece - it is based off some chord progressions and basic melodies i wrote in another track in august - "sylvia's rainbow" (written for corrupted-girl (sylvia)) - there are two versions - one for piccolo/piano at 80bpm - and the other for piano, 100bpm
i hope you enjoy them.
piano and piccolo
piano
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Zephyr Twin
from ΔΔΔ on 2003-12-09 18:13 [#00983958]
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I just listened to piano and piccolo.. I like this a lot man, though the piccolo at the very beginning seems a little cheesy.. just when you get into those upper octaves it sounds kinda fake... but I very much like the piano and the melody.. I'm downloading the piano only version now.
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Zephyr Twin
from ΔΔΔ on 2003-12-09 18:15 [#00983960]
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damn the piano is even better... I really like the progressions you used in both songs.. Maybe it's just me, but in some of those transitions it feels like im listening to something off druqks!
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corticalstim
from Canada on 2003-12-09 18:15 [#00983962]
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thank you - yeah - my software/samples kind of limits the recording - but the writing is what im really trying to focus on
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Zephyr Twin
from ΔΔΔ on 2003-12-09 18:15 [#00983963]
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"I really like the progressions you used in both songs.."
I meant the progressions, they're the same in both songs duhhhhhh. =D
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Zephyr Twin
from ΔΔΔ on 2003-12-09 18:16 [#00983964]
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I would like to hear an all piano version at 80 bpm or so.. I've come to the conclusion that I like the music from the piano only version but the speed of the piano+piccolo version. :)
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Zeus
from San Francisco (United States) on 2003-12-09 18:17 [#00983966]
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not bad man, not bad at all!
You have some nice melodies going on in there.
I do think some parts kind of rambled somewhat, and there was "empty" spaces in the harmony at times...
but over all, very nice :)
(I like the piano version better. Easier on the ears :)
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corticalstim
from Canada on 2003-12-09 18:18 [#00983968]
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:)
yeah - i just uploaded both to give a better profile of the song - because i didnt really like the sound of the piccolo too much either - but yeah - thanks a lot for listening :)
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Zephyr Twin
from ΔΔΔ on 2003-12-09 18:19 [#00983969]
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it's no problem man, let me know if you ever come up with any other versions of this song, especially if it's a slower piano version ;)
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corticalstim
from Canada on 2003-12-09 18:19 [#00983971]
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that can be arranged
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Zephyr Twin
from ΔΔΔ on 2003-12-09 18:23 [#00983976]
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that would kick ass man, haha, im on listen #5 of the piano version.. I'm becoming attached to this song haha, I think it's got a spot on the next xltronic mix cd I burn ;)
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corticalstim
from Canada on 2003-12-09 18:54 [#00983999]
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slower piano
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Zephyr Twin
from ΔΔΔ on 2003-12-09 19:27 [#00984035]
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awesome... nice work cortical systematics ;) (see existenz)
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corticalstim
from Canada on 2003-12-09 19:34 [#00984039]
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:)
i was hoping some more people would care to have a listen - hopefully someone else will check it out :)
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promo
from United Kingdom on 2003-12-09 19:35 [#00984042]
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Says no access.
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Zephyr Twin
from ΔΔΔ on 2003-12-09 19:37 [#00984045]
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yeah dude, this 80bpm version is lush, you all are missing out. ;)
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corticalstim
from Canada on 2003-12-09 19:40 [#00984048]
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it still seems to be working for me just fine - try refreshing or going through here
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promo
from United Kingdom on 2003-12-09 19:42 [#00984051]
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Cool that works.
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promo
from United Kingdom on 2003-12-09 19:43 [#00984055]
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Fuck me thats much more advanced than anything I could do by a long shot. :(
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kochlear
from aud-stim.com on 2003-12-09 19:47 [#00984060]
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i did get to listen to this then corty and my thoughts were that they are good melodies, but like everyone else says, the samples could use some work. or, you can just drown them in heavy, heavy layers of reverb. can't go wrong.
it's a nice change of pace though, not many people make things like this.
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promo
from United Kingdom on 2003-12-09 19:52 [#00984066]
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I think the track is perfect as it is. Its a complete piece in my mind. Good bloody job!
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ThisIsntMusic
from Long Island, NY (United States) on 2003-12-09 19:54 [#00984068]
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I love these pieces, I would like to hear the piece without the piano a bit slower. These songs are cool on their own, but you should consider adding some drums to that baby. Also, I think some traditional Asian instruments would really add to the vibe of the songs, cause that's the image that pops up in my head.
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corticalstim
from Canada on 2003-12-09 20:03 [#00984073]
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thanks for listening guys
kochlear - if i had the resources i would get better samples - i personally prefer the piano one, because the sample is (at least in my opinion) believable.
ThisIsntMusic - i was thinking about that - but i wouldnt want to pervert the original by doing that - i will do a "remix" of sorts with asian instruments and drums possibly.
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hedphukkerr
from mathbotton (United States) on 2003-12-09 20:18 [#00984082]
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this is pretty cool, altho with only a piano, its sounds kinda empty, prolly just from listen to all the idm with layers upon layers of instruments. very well done none the less. btw any chance i can get a midi file of this or something, id love to do a mix of this.
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corticalstim
from Canada on 2003-12-09 20:32 [#00984097]
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i emailed a midi file for you
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hedphukkerr
from mathbotton (United States) on 2003-12-09 20:37 [#00984103]
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thank you ill be remixing this soon
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Zephyr Twin
from ΔΔΔ on 2003-12-09 20:38 [#00984105]
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I think the piano sample sounds good, and I don't think the piccolo is even that bad, just in the upper octaves it sounds kinda fake. I personally don't think this song needs anything but piano. It still reminds me of a druqks piano track, just more upbeat. :)
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Zephyr Twin
from ΔΔΔ on 2003-12-09 20:38 [#00984106]
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hook me up with it when you're done. ;)
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corticalstim
from Canada on 2003-12-09 20:50 [#00984118]
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im headed to bed - thanks to everyone who listened - especially Zephyr :)
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Zephyr Twin
from ΔΔΔ on 2003-12-09 21:07 [#00984152]
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g'night, more studying for me before I can go to bed... =/ this song makes a good study song though. It's soothing and stimulating but not distracting :)
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corticalstim
from Canada on 2003-12-10 06:07 [#00984697]
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this is a *bump* of sorts :)
please check it out - im sure you will enjoy it if you have a listen.
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