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Well, heres some of my drawings for you to look at. Let me say, i do NOT consider these drawings to be art, i find them only technical achievements. second, don't call the model a Ho.. i found her in a flesh magazine for christ sakes... she is a ho!! With that said, please look at these strictly impersonal drawings, tell me what you think, and post your own shit. I've seen some of you out there are quite good. Right |
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thats some quality work! oh wait... theres no link ;) |
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they are really minimalistic |
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Hmm.. i dont see a link try copying this: http://www.tegnebordet.dk/default.asp?vis=thumbs&id=4075 |
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very nice |
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Well, i want to go to a school where i can do either animation or graphic design, and then, learning this is a simply a good idea. |
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both the stove and girl are yours ? very kool mate. |
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Thak you |
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nice stuff dirty one, did you draw that woman from a photograph or live model |
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the womans face doesn't quite look right, probably due to the fact that the mouth isn't curving around the head but instead lies on a flat plane. also the shading might be a tad lighter with more contrast, atleast thats what i would do to make it more realistic looking. i'm guessing those are photo referenced. pretty decent. |
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not to be an asshole, but i'm guessing you want critiques...but come to think of it her whole face is sort of skewed in different directions. you might try doing guidelines for the eyes and mouth before rendering. just a thought. |
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I like the dent on the side of the stove, that looks very nice. If i had a scanner I would post some of mine-- |
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Yes, i like critique!!! I myself think the portrait became to dark... But i must defend that mouth!! She had this very strange horse mouth... I think the eyes and that section is what i'm most satisfied with. The stove is not from a photo by the way... (the lady is) And i honestly do like critique, because this shit will probably be my future, and in the young age of 19, i'd like to remove the worst errors, and just learn the basisc before doing something cooler. What do you mean by Guidelines? Do you mean sketching the whole thing up before starting? |
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i generally do a real quick outline sketch to make sure proportions are correct, planes are right, etc. not like those how to draw books where you sculpt that mannequin outline first then fill in. thats a bunch of bs and would take forever to do on real drawings. looking at it i still don't think the eyes and mouth line up with the curve of the head. i suppose the photo reference would help. are you planning on majoring in art? |
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I'm with Beeblebrox. I think your pencilwork and tones are excellent, but I would advise more focus on ironing out basic shape and positioning errors in the initial sketch. The face is a little odd on that woman. |
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Yeah, perhaps ill show you the picture, that makes it easier to evaluate what i do here. Cause the only value these kind of drawings has for me, is learning proportion and shadows well. My plans are just.. something in that area! i'd like to become either a graphic designer of some sorts, an animator or do graphics on computer for games or commercials or something like that. But before you can get into the good schools, you have to have some skills. Anyway, i feel that i'm wery creative in general, i have lots of ideas of things i want to do. But i want technique first! And zaphod, i really appreciate your comments, because people i know just seem to think everything i do is good. Not that its bad, but it doesnt make me evolve much. Ive uploaded some more, take a look. The new stuff is a bit more interesting. |
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notbad dirtypriest..... haven't sketched 4 agez but i havestuff online(i used to have more i'lll see if i can find it): |
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very nice. i have some drawings as well, including nudes, however they are HUGE and impossible to scan and photo's don't to them justice. i think it would be very difficult to draw a nude from a photo, you should try a real model, you can see the real muscle structure and get a FEEL for things....ehhehehe some of my favourite drawings i've done were nudes, just because i think i captured what i wanted to from that moment in time. the curve of the neck, the shape of the muscle.......and once even the swollen belly of a pregnant woman.......it was really beautiful i thought. keep it UP.....i don't think you can ever really know everything about drawing, it's a constant challenge! btw.....the kitty kot is VERY cute!!! |
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these new ones have the same basic problems. the womans neck in the nude one is weird, like its too long and too muscled. i'd say if you worked on proportions and maybe didn't shade quite as much you'd have some pretty good drawings. i should upload my stuff, but i don't have a premium account or a website to post it on. |
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Zaphod: Again, i can see what you're saying... Would you mind if i use you again? I mean, you give some great feedback. I think myself, that the "basic" proportion is good, i mean, unlike my early drawings, i have a feel of where things should be and such. But youre right! theres almost always some minor faults in my drawings, be it one thing or the other that destroys the whole a bit. The new drawing of the lady, i did some errors with the head, that actually made the rest of the body too big. Also, the muscle around the neck became seems extremely flexed compared to verything else. I can see that now. Well.. i just have to make some new ones! this is really important to me. But still, i have only been drawing realistic for about two years, and i've never had any formal training yet, so i would lie, if i said i wasnt somewhat proud of these drawings. Thanks for the feedback. |
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