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i've been reading a load of ee cummings lately and it affects greatly the style in which i write( the way i think even ),so these two pieces i think deserve this disclaimer, which is a practice (disclaiming) i usually disagree with but fuck it: the style of these poems is one absorbed and one that pays its thanks to cummings...thanks to you who have doubtless started a worm farm of your own by now...anywayhere's'em: 1. eyes leapin' to shades; foreign... after new nap art. today's had me accident ally memori zed...like a nun wanted pH one number. so mother birds her young, further learns my lung. permanent burn's our tongue, and i sleep into shade... for an afternoon apart --------------------------------------------- 2. oh cleanest and soberest am, not for the last half a while, has been mistaken when it is as: i spent, in some reach behind my back two years, a nights--or so-- caffein g with cups, and some coff in' e'ery morn in'; but cre am and sug are for me to get ups. then, soloft y this day's now, a zee to soft en the cups' blow-- one and a half of one is one hunnert fitty; such numbers turn today to past el yellow. last, 20--but yet, as of now,the keen est--milligrams of, i am fed, a mean mess of energy's lie; it sticks to my throat, is swallow in nest, but sets the ladder tall, keeps airythings high w/out bein' hollow, 'n manages to makem atterall. ------------------------------------------------ thanks for all your all times, popes, peace -n |
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nice - i like the choppy structure of it - suits the lyrical structure and imagery of the poems |
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nice.. i am a big fan of cummings poems, and i really like these too.. i ejoyed the parts about how a "nun wanted pH one number" very interesting.. nice work.. i've also got some in a somewhat similar, cummings-influenced style as well.. i've been writing tons lately, they are located if you or anyone else is interested. it's allways fun to read some creative, interesting poetry on the board.. |
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an unwanted phone number is the answer to that part......heh, sorry 'bout that...i like that my poems have answers.....q4z2x you thanks have, it will...man of all ours |
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i get it now.. i like how this stuff can be interpreted many different ways, just how by how you read it.. |
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yeah...maybe i should say something about the second one, seeing how it has a lot to do with personal stuffs: i was arrested for selling pot plant last nov and have been sober ever since...this poem refers to the time i've been 'sober'...i've been disagreeing with the validity of my supposed sobriety lately because of the daily legal drugs i've been doing/prescribed...all of these three drugs and the dosages are hidden in the three parts of the poem....solvent |
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love em. simple as that. i always do. |
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thank you your anus |
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