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grm
from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 17:01 [#00677037]
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for a new and small site expunge.org.uk
we are looking for: comments/opinions on current issues in a sensible (ie, fact based) format
prose and poetry relating to the war in Iraq and the current world situation
illustrations for articles/poetry
have a look, and if it interests you, go for it, if not - don't bother with stupid remarks..
cheers
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Q4Z2X
on 2003-04-29 17:04 [#00677049]
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interesting.. but even stupid remarks bump your thread up to the top, resulting in more people seeing your topic..
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grm
from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 17:21 [#00677085]
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i guess
but then again, they tend to detract from the original topic..
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Q4Z2X
on 2003-04-29 17:24 [#00677088]
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i wrote something quickly:
the world, in it's current state of distrait the populace must scream and shout to make conflicting voices heard but even then they're silenced or overpowered by the deafening deceit the commander(s) may believe their actions just that their authority justifies obligatory and absolute silence
they just need to listen to the screams and shouts of it's people and it's victims to comprehend this impending reality of hate that they are attempting to facilitate
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grm
from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 17:38 [#00677110]
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thats cool. i like
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LuxExTenebris
from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 18:10 [#00677155]
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america fights iraq! i can't be silent.. bwaq! i want my opinion and my voice to be heard i want the people to stop being wared i want the little kids to be safe i want the women to cook cookies and make pudding safe i want all non-americans become americans for a little second
ah, if only these moments of life were so frequent
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I wrote that for you. Do you like it? I put a lot of hard work and feelings in it.
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Q4Z2X
on 2003-04-29 18:13 [#00677159]
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thanks
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grm
from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 18:16 [#00677166]
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indeed I do.
any names for these things?
more freestyle/speed written work would be nice to see :)
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LuxExTenebris
from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 18:32 [#00677182]
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name for that poem: "OSAMA BIN HITLER BUSH DON'T SPILL MORE BLOOD THAN NEEDED TO PAINT YOUR GAZEBO".
and a next one, more speedy freestyle:
DAMN YOUR SINS YOU SINNER OF WAR WAR IS THE WORST THING EVEN WORSE THAN A WHORE DON'T TRY TO APOLOGISE AFTER MURDERING THOUSANDS JUST TRY NOT TO DO IT AND NOONE WILL JUDGE YOUR SONS KEEP YOUR LIFE PRIVATE AND NOONE WILL NOTICE YOU'RE BURYING A SHOT DOG WITH A HUMAN BABY IN ITS BELLY
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LuxExTenebris
from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 18:33 [#00677185]
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that one was named "john lennon would cry if he saw what you did to George Lucas"
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titsworth
from Washington, DC (United States) on 2003-04-29 18:33 [#00677186]
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"well i don't know anything about poetry and i don't give a damn about prose but i sure do get a kick out of them beavis and butthead shows." -primus
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Q4Z2X
on 2003-04-29 18:39 [#00677191]
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i beg to differ with that statement. les has some great poetry/prose in his lyrics. they are brilliant
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Clic
on 2003-04-29 18:41 [#00677192]
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Let's hear it for Primus.
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LuxExTenebris
from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 18:45 [#00677200]
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hey people, did you like that one?
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Q4Z2X
on 2003-04-29 18:46 [#00677204]
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les should make some kind of anti war song ( but i don't know what his stance is.) the newest primus album has some pretty political lyrics on some it, and some are songs featuring tom morello..
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Clic
on 2003-04-29 18:48 [#00677206]
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Hmm, haven't heard it. I stopped buying albums after The Brown Album. I might check into it though.
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grm
from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 18:57 [#00677211]
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yup, sure did.
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LuxExTenebris
from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:04 [#00677218]
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will you put it in your show or what?
tell me your opinion, i did a good job
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grm
from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:08 [#00677224]
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definately. i have no problem with that. i like them all the more as they sum up how i feel - of being completely helpless and unable to do shit about it. I just want it all to stop, but i know it won't for a very long time.
the poetry will start to go up over the weekend, i'll keep you posted.
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corticalstim
from Canada on 2003-04-29 19:09 [#00677225]
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war and hate, its all same to me, why can't we all, just live free? i really dont know, whats going on, the state of the world, decency gone. so many deaths, what can i say, our corrupted leaders, have a price to pay. i am writing this poem, to let the world know, i cant stand to see, our world be let go.
(title: "George Bush got anal raped with hedgeclippers by Britney Spears in the backseat of a giraffe")
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LuxExTenebris
from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:17 [#00677228]
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i want the govnment to stop takin a nap!!! i want the world to stop killing our kids!!! i dream of sheep sleeping on a wolves' lap!!! i see my eyes blinded by a nuclear blit!!! i can't breathe anymore, it's the blood of earth!! i got flooded by the wrath of god!! i don't want to die but i also can't go forth!!! and to think, all this bad stuff is mud!!!
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LuxExTenebris
from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:24 [#00677239]
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that was called "sweet dreams to you nappin on a corpse of christ eh?"
and now, a song!!! called "killing the bad people is okay as long as you love them in your heart"
LET'S KILL WAR BCOS ITS EVIL! LET'S WAGE WAR ON WAR TO KILL IT DED! LET'S CALL ELTHON JOHN TO SING A SONG ABOUT IT! LET'S JUST GO OUTSIDE AND HUG....
(chorus) HUG THE TREES, HUG THE KIDS, HUG THE WOMEN, HUG THE MEN, HUG THE DIRT, HUG THE SKY, HUG EVV....RY.... THING!!!
THE CLOWNS ARE GOOD AND FUNNY THE SINGERS ARE TOO LOUD SO WHY SHOULD WE KEEP SUFFERING? YOU JUST GET RID OF THEM WITHOUT ANY DOUBT!!!
(chorus) x2
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grm
from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:28 [#00677245]
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blinkered::deaf::charging_in::no_thought::pain::pain::pain: :we_hold_no_say::not_interested::unheard::taken_for_fools:: still_he_charges_on::friendly::fire::friendly::fire::friend ly::fire::you're_no_friend_of_mine::hurt::suffering::hold_t his::cluster_bomb::hold_this::one_thought::a_token_of_nothi ng::no_war_yet_won::commerce_rolls_on
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grm
from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:31 [#00677248]
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i like the names you're coming up with, nice.
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LuxExTenebris
from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:43 [#00677269]
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Hey man... Just wanted to say.. Originally my idea was to ruin your poetry/prose affair with all kinds of ridiculous shit I could come up with. But if you like what I'm giving you, you can use it. Heheheheh.
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LuxExTenebris
from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:44 [#00677270]
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Sorry. Heh.
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grm
from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:51 [#00677274]
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yeah, I did think that but I wanted to see how you'd react if I played along, and you played well.
I did expect nothing more than your original idea from here, but i thought i'd give it a try all the same. i'll have to see how many other people go the same way now as you've fed ideas into peoples heads..
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grm
from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:54 [#00677275]
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:)
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LuxExTenebris
from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 20:06 [#00677284]
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:D
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