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offline grm from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 17:01 [#00677037]
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for a new and small site expunge.org.uk

we are looking for:
comments/opinions on current issues in a sensible (ie, fact
based) format
prose and poetry relating to the war in Iraq and the current
world situation
illustrations for articles/poetry

have a look, and if it interests you, go for it, if not -
don't bother with stupid remarks..

cheers


 

offline Q4Z2X on 2003-04-29 17:04 [#00677049]
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interesting.. but even stupid remarks bump your thread up to
the top, resulting in more people seeing your topic..


 

offline grm from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 17:21 [#00677085]
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i guess

but then again, they tend to detract from the original
topic..


 

offline Q4Z2X on 2003-04-29 17:24 [#00677088]
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i wrote something quickly:

the world, in it's current state of distrait
the populace must scream and shout
to make conflicting voices heard
but even then they're silenced
or overpowered by the deafening deceit
the commander(s) may believe their actions just
that their authority justifies obligatory and absolute
silence
they just need to listen to the screams and shouts
of it's people and it's victims
to comprehend this impending reality of hate
that they are attempting to facilitate


 

offline grm from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 17:38 [#00677110]
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thats cool. i like


 

offline LuxExTenebris from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 18:10 [#00677155]
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america fights iraq!
i can't be silent.. bwaq!
i want my opinion and my voice to be heard
i want the people to stop being wared
i want the little kids to be safe
i want the women to cook cookies and make pudding safe
i want all non-americans become americans for a little
second
ah, if only these moments of life were so frequent

--

I wrote that for you. Do you like it?
I put a lot of hard work and feelings in it.


 

offline Q4Z2X on 2003-04-29 18:13 [#00677159]
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thanks


 

offline grm from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 18:16 [#00677166]
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indeed I do.

any names for these things?

more freestyle/speed written work would be nice to see :)


 

offline LuxExTenebris from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 18:32 [#00677182]
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name for that poem: "OSAMA BIN HITLER BUSH DON'T SPILL MORE
BLOOD THAN NEEDED TO PAINT YOUR GAZEBO".

and a next one, more speedy freestyle:

DAMN YOUR SINS YOU SINNER OF WAR
WAR IS THE WORST THING EVEN WORSE THAN A WHORE
DON'T TRY TO APOLOGISE AFTER MURDERING THOUSANDS
JUST TRY NOT TO DO IT AND NOONE WILL JUDGE YOUR SONS
KEEP YOUR LIFE PRIVATE AND NOONE WILL NOTICE
YOU'RE BURYING A SHOT DOG WITH A HUMAN BABY IN ITS BELLY


 

offline LuxExTenebris from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 18:33 [#00677185]
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that one was named "john lennon would cry if he saw what you
did to George Lucas"


 

offline titsworth from Washington, DC (United States) on 2003-04-29 18:33 [#00677186]
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"well i don't know anything about poetry and i don't give a
damn about prose but i sure do get a kick out of them beavis
and butthead shows." -primus


 

offline Q4Z2X on 2003-04-29 18:39 [#00677191]
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i beg to differ with that statement. les has some great
poetry/prose in his lyrics. they are brilliant


 

offline Clic on 2003-04-29 18:41 [#00677192]
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Let's hear it for Primus.


 

offline LuxExTenebris from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 18:45 [#00677200]
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hey people, did you like that one?


 

offline Q4Z2X on 2003-04-29 18:46 [#00677204]
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les should make some kind of anti war song ( but i don't
know what his stance is.) the newest primus album has some
pretty political lyrics on some it, and some are songs
featuring tom morello..


 

offline Clic on 2003-04-29 18:48 [#00677206]
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Hmm, haven't heard it. I stopped buying albums after The
Brown Album. I might check into it though.


 

offline grm from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 18:57 [#00677211]
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yup, sure did.


 

offline LuxExTenebris from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:04 [#00677218]
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will you put it in your show or what?

tell me your opinion, i did a good job


 

offline grm from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:08 [#00677224]
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definately. i have no problem with that. i like them all
the more as they sum up how i feel - of being completely
helpless and unable to do shit about it. I just want it all
to stop, but i know it won't for a very long time.

the poetry will start to go up over the weekend, i'll keep
you posted.


 

offline corticalstim from Canada on 2003-04-29 19:09 [#00677225]
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war and hate, its all same to me,
why can't we all, just live free?
i really dont know, whats going on,
the state of the world, decency gone.
so many deaths, what can i say,
our corrupted leaders, have a price to pay.
i am writing this poem, to let the world know,
i cant stand to see, our world be let go.

(title: "George Bush got anal raped with hedgeclippers by
Britney Spears in the backseat of a giraffe")


 

offline LuxExTenebris from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:17 [#00677228]
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i want the govnment to stop takin a nap!!!
i want the world to stop killing our kids!!!
i dream of sheep sleeping on a wolves' lap!!!
i see my eyes blinded by a nuclear blit!!!
i can't breathe anymore, it's the blood of earth!!
i got flooded by the wrath of god!!
i don't want to die but i also can't go forth!!!
and to think, all this bad stuff is mud!!!


 

offline LuxExTenebris from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:24 [#00677239]
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that was called "sweet dreams to you nappin on a corpse of
christ eh?"

and now, a song!!! called "killing the bad people is okay as
long as you love them in your heart"

LET'S KILL WAR BCOS ITS EVIL!
LET'S WAGE WAR ON WAR TO KILL IT DED!
LET'S CALL ELTHON JOHN TO SING A SONG ABOUT IT!
LET'S JUST GO OUTSIDE AND HUG....

(chorus)
HUG THE TREES, HUG THE KIDS, HUG THE WOMEN, HUG THE MEN, HUG
THE DIRT, HUG THE SKY, HUG EVV....RY.... THING!!!

THE CLOWNS ARE GOOD AND FUNNY
THE SINGERS ARE TOO LOUD
SO WHY SHOULD WE KEEP SUFFERING?
YOU JUST GET RID OF THEM WITHOUT ANY DOUBT!!!

(chorus) x2


 

offline grm from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:28 [#00677245]
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blinkered::deaf::charging_in::no_thought::pain::pain::pain:
:we_hold_no_say::not_interested::unheard::taken_for_fools::
still_he_charges_on::friendly::fire::friendly::fire::friend
ly::fire::you're_no_friend_of_mine::hurt::suffering::hold_t
his::cluster_bomb::hold_this::one_thought::a_token_of_nothi
ng::no_war_yet_won::commerce_rolls_on


 

offline grm from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:31 [#00677248]
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i like the names you're coming up with, nice.


 

offline LuxExTenebris from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:43 [#00677269]
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Hey man... Just wanted to say.. Originally my idea was to
ruin your poetry/prose affair with all kinds of ridiculous
shit I could come up with. But if you like what I'm giving
you, you can use it. Heheheheh.


 

offline LuxExTenebris from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:44 [#00677270]
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Sorry. Heh.


 

offline grm from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:51 [#00677274]
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yeah, I did think that but I wanted to see how you'd react
if I played along, and you played well.

I did expect nothing more than your original idea from here,
but i thought i'd give it a try all the same. i'll have to
see how many other people go the same way now as you've fed
ideas into peoples heads..


 

offline grm from London (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 19:54 [#00677275]
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:)


 

offline LuxExTenebris from ehh... tenebris? (United Kingdom) on 2003-04-29 20:06 [#00677284]
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:D


 


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