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I've got two songs on the internet, for the first time. I suggest you check them out and give me some feedback (keep in mind I'm relatively new at this making songs thing). The site is http://www.zebox.com/powli/...enjoy! |
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its alright, but too much repeating - it becomes boring. but keep up the good work. |
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Yeah, I do tend to repeat too much, but I suppose with practice all will improve. |
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i like the scary sound in my flying car..the ending is kinda funny =) |
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Blast, no one ever seems to respond to my posts, and they are always different. Perhaps I'm a much boring person that I thought...heh. |
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*very few people respond *much more boring |
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well, just make some controversal shit, describe your music and what kind of feedback you need, and then be a little provoking. |
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I'll listen to yours if you |
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powli - flying car was cool it wouldnt let me listen to the other one... ws - it wouldnt let me listen to any of yours :( now someone listen to mine: www.zebox.com/rongenemy/ |
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weatheredstoner yours were pretty damn cool...I particularly liked your first one. |
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damn i wish i could hear... maybe tomorrow my computer will let me, then ill tell you what i think |
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rongenemy...I liked your first one a lot, you're second one was good but (don't become offended by this because most all mine are anyways) amateurish / "cheesy" if you will. |
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That was not bad. Here's my suggestion: You are good at melodies/basslines and you have decent beats. Also at the end of your song you have some really kickass sounds going on that create this great visual effect. I suggest combining all your talents in the same moment. Have great ambient/noise soundscapes playing while you have some drums playing while you faintly punch out a melody in the background. :P I'm stoned, perhaps this will help more: You could be a more melodic version of Speedy J. Only doing your own personal thing to make it into something original. Hope this helps. |
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staring into nothing wasn't bad, just a bit repetitive. Some chord changes would be nice. But I ramble too much. |
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thank you for the kind words and tips. ill be shure to try some of your suggestions... weatheredstoner- i was able to listen to yours finally and i really liked em. the 2nd ones probably my favorite. |
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The 2nd one was at least 10 times better than the first one imho. I like that rhythm... it sounds so hectic. The entire song sounds like it's having a panic-attack. It's very simple, but still pretty good. The 1st song didn't do much for me though. |
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I'm confused when everyone says 1st, sencond or third. They have names!! |
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When i said 1st, i meant the one before the 2nd... and vice versa ofcourse :-p No seriously... i had already closed his zebox-page, and couldn't be bothered to go back to look up the titles again. The 1st was something about flying cars i think... and the 2nd was just... the other. |
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