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flea
from depths of your mind (New Zealand) on 2002-04-23 23:01 [#00191203]
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thanks for the feedback and taking it all on board I have another version of the track...feedeback appreciated..
so far up my own hula hut
those who found the previous version a bit directionless might prefer this one:)
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flea
from depths of your mind (New Zealand) on 2002-04-23 23:03 [#00191207]
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aaargh here's the link again flea be dumb
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REFLEX
from Edmonton, Alberta (Canada) on 2002-04-24 00:03 [#00191306]
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flea::. this song was confusing too me, but not in a bad way. It reminded me of a older Autechre song, almost but much more glitchy, ofcourse! But... hm... its strange.... I do enjoy this song, and find it quite listenable and moody. Good stuff here flea, Id want to see you keep this up.
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flea
from depths of your mind (New Zealand) on 2002-04-24 00:21 [#00191351]
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thanks Reflex..here's what I thought of your stuff...
Able to Guide..has some very cool moments..especially the high pictched metallic break...the song starts very cool..like slosed down gabba..that distorted kick is cool..but then it gets a bit too busy and looses its distinction...the tracks looses me a bit till that yummy break kicks in...that second bassy soun is a bit too bassy..but when it all gets going..its very cool...maybe it need a bit of editing..tightening..its got lots of potential..
All in The... is a very good EBM track to me..reminds me a lot of Lustmords project...Terror against Terror..have you heard that album?..if not you absoulutely must...I like the sinister but subtle bassline..very moody..slightly oppressive atmospherics...you show a lot of retraint on this track which I like a lot...the threat is always lurking in the shadows..
good one..
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REFLEX
from Edmonton, Alberta (Canada) on 2002-04-24 00:24 [#00191363]
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flea:! kick! ass! thanks!... hey yeah thanks for the good comments, I showed my girlfriend that able to guide song {the one you said with potential} and she said it shounded too broken up like a demo.
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flea
from depths of your mind (New Zealand) on 2002-04-24 00:26 [#00191370]
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cheers:)
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REFLEX
from Edmonton, Alberta (Canada) on 2002-04-24 00:35 [#00191395]
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so by saying that I meant that you, my girlfriend and I believe the same thing about that one song, it does need editing and refining.
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flea
from depths of your mind (New Zealand) on 2002-04-24 01:11 [#00191468]
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hmm yeah..there some excellent parts getting buried under some duller more cumbersome ones..you need to letem shine..:)
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-04-24 01:12 [#00191473]
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I saw the scariest commercial today. It was for snuggle fabric softener, but there was this evil porcupine critter laying on some towels and was going "come on squeeze me, I'm so soft, come on, go ahead". Evil decieving porcupines.
I'll check the song later.
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REFLEX
from Edmonton, Alberta (Canada) on 2002-04-24 01:19 [#00191493]
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thanks flea. Ill work onit.
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flea
from depths of your mind (New Zealand) on 2002-04-24 02:01 [#00191541]
Points: 9083 Status: Regular | Followup to w M w: #00191473
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there's an even stanger commercial here...Cadburys...the jingle goes..to the tune of a sicly sweet beach boys song... wouldnt it be nice if the world were made of Cadbury's choclate..and this dude made of choclate is surfing on an ocean of choclate...and then a shark comes and instead of running the dude just wriggles his bottom and invites the shark to eat his butt..and the jingle goes..and if a shark come out to bite you..you can say I am made of choclate I invite you..
its either subversive genius or totally bonkers acid burnout who came up with it I think..
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diemax
from somewhere in tennessee :( (United States) on 2002-04-24 02:17 [#00191558]
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good good good
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2002-04-24 09:32 [#00191824]
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heh heh, havn't seen that one.
This remix IS much better. It's more "fun" than the other. And all tied together with a drum beat. And it's sound is more striking, louder more pronounced parts. I don't know how it would have sounded if you kept that one melody, that sort of tied the previous mix together in a good way but it wasn't a perfect melody or anything, I guess those drums in the new one are a better tier than that melody. The previous mix was all complex and intricate but just kept on going I guess. It was approaching irritating yet still interesting. This one is closer to your more regular style, with chaotic parts all mingling in and out. It's quite a wicked track.
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flea
from depths of your mind (New Zealand) on 2002-04-24 15:41 [#00192322]
Points: 9083 Status: Regular | Followup to w M w: #00191824
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danke..:)
I was going for a floaty..disorienting ehter space in the last one but just couldnt have it totally unanchored and unhinged hence tried to tie it all down with that melody part..which was a weakness..in my opinion...I should have just let it loose without a map or a landmark..which is something I will try again...
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