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offline outline aka6u9 from toronto, kyiv (Canada) on 2009-02-06 16:16 [#02270628]
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www.virb.com/outline
critique all you want

welcome :D


 

offline ecnadniarb on 2009-02-06 16:34 [#02270629]
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hey guy! you advert is A.


 

offline AMPI MAX from United Kingdom on 2009-02-06 17:25 [#02270637]
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pooey beats man.


 

offline outline aka6u9 from toronto, kyiv (Canada) on 2009-02-06 19:45 [#02270676]
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i expect no further reviews from members of this forum..
cause youre too i.d.m., right?


 

offline JivverDicker from my house on 2009-02-06 19:57 [#02270682]
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It's because the drums are flaccid and there's apparently no
bass, thansk.


 

offline ijonspeches from 109P/Swift-Tuttle on 2009-02-06 19:59 [#02270683]
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we re too damn intelligent to listen to music in general.
its all just a joke to us...
ah fuckit, maybe i listen tomorrow.


 

offline outline aka6u9 from toronto, kyiv (Canada) on 2009-02-07 13:15 [#02270805]
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the drums are superior and theres plenty of bass
in the other corner theres fatal compression on the tunes
(~128kbps)
so, ... this forum sucks hardcore; i must say! :P


 

offline dave_g from United Kingdom on 2009-02-07 13:57 [#02270814]
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Drums are not "superior".
Please listen to some decent jungle/dnb, specifically the
drums.

Your drums are really poorly EQ'd. The sound is really
"muddy". Maybe it is the compression on the music player the
website uses, but it is not good.

The whole sound is really fatiguing. Now, maybe it's all
being squeezed by the audio compression codec, so use
something different (even youtube is better, check
this for example).

Have a look at this for hints on EQing your sounds :
forum post on future producers forum.

Anyway, get the EQ sorted first, so people can actually
listen to it without going nuts.
Then sort out the songs themselves because they're a bit
boring.

Repetition isn't a bad thing per se, but it has to be done
right and unfortunately you've not managed it.

If you don't like the responses here, you could try dogs on
acid, but I suspect they would be quite rude about your
tracks.


 

offline outline aka6u9 from toronto, kyiv (Canada) on 2009-02-07 14:02 [#02270815]
Points: 90 Status: Lurker



i got eqs sorted four years ago. this is my new sound
compressed two times in mp3 format for the internet
massive.

WE DONT NEED NO EDUCATION . . .

TOO DUTOO DUN TO DUNDUN


 

offline dave_g from United Kingdom on 2009-02-07 14:18 [#02270820]
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If you have it sorted, why cripple your songs by using such
a poor medium? Bung it on youtube and it won't compress the
life out of it. Unless you are afraid for people to hear the
"sorted" EQ??


 

offline outline aka6u9 from toronto, kyiv (Canada) on 2009-02-07 14:31 [#02270823]
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youve got point to the nearest.
third compression process was done by virb (if there was one
at all)

I value music, a lot and i dont need paper or metals for it
:D


 

offline rudster from the glasgow on 2009-02-07 16:11 [#02270854]
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i gave each track a 10 second whirl, and i will agree with
jivver,

tracks need a decent mastering but at the same time u cannot
polish averageness


 

offline AMPI MAX from United Kingdom on 2009-02-07 16:11 [#02270855]
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nah the drums just sound soft and crappy cos they dont kick
and overall sound is boring.


 

offline rudster from the glasgow on 2009-02-07 16:14 [#02270859]
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how d&b should be done


 

offline Tractern from Brighton (United Kingdom) on 2009-02-07 17:07 [#02270872]
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Dude, rather than arguing, why don't you listen to people's
criticism? That's the only way you will improve. Just
telling yourself that are shit hot will only leave you
creatively stagnant.

Peace out!

X


 

offline roygbivcore from Joyrex.com, of course! on 2009-02-07 20:08 [#02270916]
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try sampling breaks instead of writing them. generally when
you write something out in a program it becomes over
quantized to the beat and sounds very stale. breaks will
give you a more live sound.

throw a little tape distortion on there while youre at it


 

offline outline aka6u9 from toronto, kyiv (Canada) on 2009-02-10 18:54 [#02271736]
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wack criticism.
continue if ytou dare


 

offline recycle from Where is Phobiazero (Lincoln) (United States) on 2009-02-10 19:26 [#02271751]
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im down for this tonight


 

offline ijonspeches from 109P/Swift-Tuttle on 2009-02-10 19:54 [#02271753]
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sorry, sounds way too friendly!


 

offline Mission AD from United States on 2009-02-10 23:51 [#02271759]
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i love drums and bass!


 

offline outline aka6u9 from toronto, kyiv (Canada) on 2009-02-19 19:00 [#02273588]
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I updated the page visualee...
will upload more trax very soon :]


 

offline Skink from A cesspool in eden on 2009-02-19 21:06 [#02273615]
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You have a major attitude problem.


 

offline outline aka6u9 from toronto, kyiv (Canada) on 2009-02-20 11:56 [#02273795]
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.melborp edutitta rojam a evah uoY


 

offline plaidzebra from so long, xlt on 2009-02-20 13:21 [#02273836]
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i guess it just takes a little controversy to get me to
listen.

the bar for d'n'b has been raised very high; it's a style
that's been done to death.

these tunes are good enough for the person who made them to
enjoy. for me, these are flaccid, predictable, muddy, and
the percussion programming is uninteresting and amateurish.
they would have sounded dated ten years ago.

my advice is to forget about trying to make a bunch of
strangers happy with your tunes. there's no chance of
making any commercial inroads in this style, so focus on
making the tunes that you like. push yourself hard with
each track.

maybe this was an idm forum once, but most people here are
into a variety of musics. the sun set on idm years ago
anyway.

if you're looking for an ego stroke, play the tunes for your
friends, and they'll tell you how talented you are.


 

offline outline aka6u9 from toronto, kyiv (Canada) on 2009-02-20 15:21 [#02273853]
Points: 90 Status: Lurker



just uploaded "Universe Bass Anthem"
exp swingstep hehe
101


 


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