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just completed a track tonight, it's called 11.06 accelerate btw this is the short version in case your curious, i'm using software called Zebra, it's like a modeling synth, sub/add |
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Hah you trick me into listening thinking it was electro. |
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Do you know, I like your track, I don't know if it's electro, genre names are assumed and reassigned all the time these days. Good track though, is it a bit quiet? Better than overdiven I suppose, I like the ambient spaces, it made me think of Space 1999, imagine, the beats were rolling and not "fucky", the whole thing was like a pleasing pulp sci-fi novel, not too demanding, yet made you think and by no means wasted your time. I am going to leave it in my playlist so every time it comes on I'll go "Who the fuck is this again... oh that bloke larn." Do you have an artist name, only I do like to tag my mp3s? |
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Oh and Machines by Laurent X came on afterwards, thatr went well. |
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my artist name is Larn, i have about 4 complete tracks to far, and loads of loops and recorded jams |
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Wow, I like it a lot all through, excellent one larn ! I love the bass reverb at the intro, and then it's great how background slow pads fit with your percussions. Also is nice how the percs are slow and fast at the same time in a pretty complex and subtle manner, i love this. Awesome sound design too, must be some weird patching... Only drawbacks : I found the 2.30 to 2.40 section to be too short (though i'm not sure after more listens) 3.12 until end is really good Please post the longer version, I'm curious ! |
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i like the squirty synth - the minimalism in the beginning reminds me of something from a Silicon Knights game or some old Throbbing Gristle. I'm more of a fan of complex beats but i really like the subtlety of yours as it suits the track. However, it feels a bit thin, like it could use another layer or two. But if minimalism is what you're shooting for, it's quite decent. I also agree the volume needs to be a bit higher. After the 3 minute mark i really started to enjoy it more, but that's just my crack-brained mash-up side talking. |
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Yeah, stick up the full version, I think it'd be worth it. I've already listened to this twice. Tis good. |
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thanks for the comment, i have only been writing for about a year, so lots to learn |
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well it's good for starting out. keep on with it. :) |
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i like it. the main riff in the intro, and the first section is so sparse, if it had more bass i'd almost call it dubstep. the drums are choppy and glitchy, but you still maintain a groove, which a lot of stuff in this vein can do. the second section (where the fast bits start coming in) i'm not as hot on. the drum programming is good, but i wish they had more punch to them. also it lacks a bit of the melody the first section had. but these are minor nitpicks (constructive criticism if you will). i'm imagining spinning this with some skream or something under the first section, then throwing in some vsnares towards the end. >:D |
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"but you still maintain a groove, which a lot of stuff in this vein can do" = "but you manage to not lose the groove, which a lot of stuff in this vein can do." |
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thanks |
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this is badass and has some fat beats in it, are your waffles this good? |
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Dude it's GOA ACID. I like it, I don't know what to call it. How about post-genre. |
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You have exceeded your daily bandwidth limit. I'll give her a listen tomorrow. |
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haha well i might be selling waffles at glade next year, but i wish i could play there instead :(( writing music is hard, this has taken me a while to complete and i'm still not happy with it. i have been working along side this track on an ambient version. i'l post it soon thanks for listening |
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damn sorry about the bandwidth limit |
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