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         |  cx
             from Norway on 2007-09-18 15:09 [#02121312] Points: 4537 Status: Regular
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 | you left me 
 sifel
 
 Bixit cookies with chocolate to anyone who listens and a
 hug!
 
 
 
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         |  Wolfslice
             from Bay Area, CA (United States) on 2007-09-19 01:24 [#02121455] Points: 5097 Status: Lurker
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 | You Left Me- really like the melodies, especially the vocalish stuff. I would say you need to soften the synth
 that comes in at 1:49, its texture is out of place with the
 rest of the song. The drums are also also a bit too low
 volume wise, and I'd like it better if they had more
 movement, as they tend to get repetitive.
 
 Sifel- ehhhhh, i guess theres a time and place for this sort
 of cheesy 4 on the 4 stuff, but it's not really for me. For
 Wolfslice it's a no, but I'm sure you could make a room full
 of glow stick wielding  ravers happy with it.
 
 
 
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         |  cx
             from Norway on 2007-09-19 04:06 [#02121468] Points: 4537 Status: Regular
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 | hey wolf, thanks for the critique, im working on 'you left me' as we speak to make it better..
 
 cheers
 
 
 
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         |  cx
             from Norway on 2007-09-19 05:14 [#02121488] Points: 4537 Status: Regular
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 | this song turns out to be a lot of hassle ;p 
 here's a new version could use some pointers on it
 
 not happy with the ending as it fails i think
 
 LAZY_TITLE
 
 
 
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         |  cx
             from Norway on 2007-09-22 05:06 [#02122946] Points: 4537 Status: Regular
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 | ill put all spam in one thread, bleh, anyone want to give some feedback on this new piano thing?
 
 KAJSA
 
 
 
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