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cx
from Norway on 2007-09-18 15:09 [#02121312]
Points: 4537 Status: Regular
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you left me
sifel
Bixit cookies with chocolate to anyone who listens and a hug!
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Wolfslice
from Bay Area, CA (United States) on 2007-09-19 01:24 [#02121455]
Points: 4911 Status: Lurker
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You Left Me- really like the melodies, especially the vocalish stuff. I would say you need to soften the synth that comes in at 1:49, its texture is out of place with the rest of the song. The drums are also also a bit too low volume wise, and I'd like it better if they had more movement, as they tend to get repetitive.
Sifel- ehhhhh, i guess theres a time and place for this sort of cheesy 4 on the 4 stuff, but it's not really for me. For Wolfslice it's a no, but I'm sure you could make a room full of glow stick wielding ravers happy with it.
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cx
from Norway on 2007-09-19 04:06 [#02121468]
Points: 4537 Status: Regular
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hey wolf, thanks for the critique, im working on 'you left me' as we speak to make it better..
cheers
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cx
from Norway on 2007-09-19 05:14 [#02121488]
Points: 4537 Status: Regular
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this song turns out to be a lot of hassle ;p
here's a new version could use some pointers on it
not happy with the ending as it fails i think
LAZY_TITLE
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cx
from Norway on 2007-09-22 05:06 [#02122946]
Points: 4537 Status: Regular
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ill put all spam in one thread, bleh, anyone want to give some feedback on this new piano thing?
KAJSA
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