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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2007-06-04 19:06 [#02090578]
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The past few days I've been trying to compose a simple piece, but failing miserably... the melodies would run away from me, get muddied and obscured. But, tonight, I believe I've managed to compose something pretty and with simple melodies, almost a gentle Rondo... Anyway, I hope that you enjoy it for the 2m12s it lasts.
pAX
A Clockwork Robin
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2007-06-04 19:11 [#02090583]
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I think you've made better.
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2007-06-04 19:12 [#02090585]
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That cut me deep, man. I spent the past hours of my life on this.. *weeps*
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2007-06-04 19:15 [#02090587]
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I downloaded it directly into my recycle bin! Next!
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2007-06-04 19:15 [#02090588]
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haha! you cunt! ...And to think I was admiring your motherfucking avatar!
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2007-06-04 19:22 [#02090590]
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If you were admiring it then I will change it!
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2007-06-04 19:25 [#02090592]
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I'm just kidding but I guess it's kind of repetitious and the fast note series are kind of awkward, even though it's still light years better than any melody I can make. You do in general make great melodies though.
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2007-06-04 19:27 [#02090594]
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I dono, maybe it's a grower..:D there's a few nice little touches, but I'm sorry to hear you don't like the minor glissandos :(
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w M w
from London (United Kingdom) on 2007-06-04 19:35 [#02090597]
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I tried to remember what that king tells you in katamari damacy when you lose. He makes you feel quite bad. Something like 'i guess it wasn't your fault. it was i who never should have believed in you.'
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2007-06-04 19:39 [#02090598]
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Sir Noll, I grieve greatly that I have let you down with this series of melodic variations. Pls not to cut head off. :-|
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Grahf
from Manchester (United Kingdom) on 2007-06-04 19:41 [#02090600]
Points: 388 Status: Regular | Followup to marlowe: #02090578
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i liked it.. it reminded me of something... cant put my finger on what though..
hmm
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marlowe
from Antarctica on 2007-06-05 10:21 [#02090719]
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Thanks Grahf, glad you enjoyed it (unlike that bastard Ian 'Grassy' Noll!)
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cx
from Norway on 2007-06-05 11:37 [#02090752]
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nice changes in there.. i like the glissandos.. must be a lot of work to figure out all these progressions, all in all very nice.
i do think you could beef up the sound a little bit though, especially the bass.
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