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Hi. I have just done a new song called Dark Fairground, and as most of you requested, it is longer than 1 minute, at a runtime of 2:33. Enjoy, and comment. -Adam. |
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Very funny. |
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this song sucks |
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Why thank you so much. Very kind of you to say. I'm flattered. -Adam. |
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You do realize you didn't link to your song, right? I can't read sarcasm very well, especially on the internets. |
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Oh, Crap. I'm sorry. I forgot to put the link. I am really sorry. I wasn't trying to be a smart ass. -Adam. |
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It's too repetitive. The second half of the song seems nearly identical to the first. Within each of the two parts, there is too much repetition as well. The exact same bar of melody plays 4 times in a row. You need to vary the melody, similarly to how you've varied the rhythm. The rhythm is the best part about what you've got. I also dislike the clavs, or e-piano, or whatever it is. It seems too cheesy. I'd suggest trying a different sound for the lead. |
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The e-piano was supposed to sound cheesy like a crappy circus. -Adam. |
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Oh, and you know how repetitive an organ grinder is? That is kind of what I was trying to simulate as well. Just trying to get the feel of a really cheap tossed togeather carnival. Then the chorus was supposed to be getting attacked by a bunch of carnie zombies. lol. |
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Quite pleasant at the beginning, although a tad too slow in the build-up. I didn't like the 2nd section with it's I to flattened V change, got a bit messy then. I notice it's basically just A-B-A-B in structure too; why not add the variations in? Anyway, it was alright but lacking that something. |
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I get what you mean. I was alittle kind of not very pleased with how the transition between the chorus and 2nd verse turned out. Kind of loopish sounding, although it wasn't a loop. Go alittle more in to detail about what your meaning of variations are. I am alittle slow to pick up on things. -Adam. |
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I mean, it's quite ok to repeat a section, but try to make it a variation rather than straight copy/paste job, which is what it sounded like :] |
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-Adam |
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now playing: Carl Orff - Gassenhauer |
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RDJ album feat. drunken cocks dancind cockc |
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Is there some type of conversation that just scooted its way in here? |
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