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yann_g
from now on 2006-07-31 10:46 [#01946664]
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been received the critique recently that my tracks sounded too random, i guess this one doesn't. production-wise it's crap, couldn't make sounds suitable for those melodies/chords :(
suggestions?
accords
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i_x_ten
from arsemuncher on 2006-07-31 10:57 [#01946668]
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its got a nice baroque feel to it, i like that. woefully underdeveloped though. i liked the synth at 1.05, sounds like early tangerine dream, but then it stops why? this does have potential, don't give up
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i_x_ten
from arsemuncher on 2006-07-31 11:00 [#01946670]
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its got a nice baroque feel to it, i like that. woefully underdeveloped though. i liked the synth at 1.05, sounds like early tangerine dream, but then it stops why? this does have potential, don't give up
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7Pd
from britney's upskirt vagina on 2006-07-31 11:07 [#01946672]
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its got a nice baroque feel to it, i like that. woefully underdeveloped though. i liked the synth at 1.05, sounds like early tangerine dream, but then it stops why? this does
have potential, don't give up
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-07-31 11:10 [#01946675]
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i think you should use a few effects on it, its vibe is real uhh, richard kelly style? just needs some more 'stuff'
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staz
on 2006-07-31 11:13 [#01946677]
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the melodic modulations sound a bit awkward
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yann_g
from now on 2006-07-31 12:01 [#01946720]
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richard kelly the director? never saw any of his movies...
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yann_g
from now on 2006-07-31 12:02 [#01946721]
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the synth stops because the track's only a rough.
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hanal
from k_maty only (United Kingdom) on 2006-07-31 12:04 [#01946724]
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its got a nice baroque feel to it, i like that. woefully underdeveloped though. i liked the synth at 1.05, sounds like early tangerine dream, but then it stops why? this does
have potential, don't give up
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sirmailbox
from chicago area (United States) on 2006-07-31 12:51 [#01946749]
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This isn't too bad. The melodies are decent. I'd recommend ending it differently, though. It seems like it ends on its weakest leg, leaving me with a bad last impression.
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swears
from junk sleep on 2006-07-31 12:56 [#01946754]
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I'm not really into this, I have to say. I like your "random" stuff a lot better.
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DirtyPriest
from Copenhagen (Denmark) on 2006-07-31 13:17 [#01946775]
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Some very odd harmonic changes there. Sort of twisted church music in a sense.
I quite like it actually!
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yann_g
from now on 2006-07-31 15:11 [#01946849]
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damn! i don't find anything odd in this track. does anyone here listen to classical music from the 19th century?
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yann_g
from now on 2006-07-31 18:20 [#01946983]
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file has been updated. i love this tune :) gotta explore it :)
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impakt
from where we do not speak of! on 2006-07-31 18:34 [#01946990]
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I like it, but some of the chord progressions are a bit strange I think. You should add some beats in my opinion :)
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yann_g
from now on 2006-07-31 19:27 [#01947019]
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couldn't to to mp3, the actual recent file is the ogg vorbis one.
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uviol
from United States on 2006-07-31 19:27 [#01947020]
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Hahaha.. nicely done.
In regards to the track, I like it quite a bit too. You definitely have a unique sound. The lack of overt beats is one of the track's more noteworthy features, imo.. I say keep it as is. I mainly like the synth warbles that come in at 1:05 and again around 1:58.. sounds somewhat like a couple tracks from Tri Repetae and that cow adbuction level from Earthworm Jim.
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yann_g
from now on 2006-07-31 19:40 [#01947025]
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haha, it's far from finished tho. glad you "like it quite a bit too". thx for the comments, i'll post again when finished :)
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yann_g
from now on 2006-08-01 09:31 [#01947317]
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bwhahahump!
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yann_g
from now on 2006-08-01 20:19 [#01947640]
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ogg updated
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yann_g
from now on 2011-08-13 21:54 [#02419255]
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finished version
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