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heres a and you can also get it on , its the top one, called Triggerbys just bashed this one out, bit of an technoey aciddy number i spose, im not really sure what im doing anymore. so id like some hot hard fast xlt comments. I know its a bit scrappy at this stage but is anything in particular fucking it up for you? hate it? hate me? suggestions etc thanks |
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nicely produced. the thing that isn't working for me is the slightly too funky acid line which doesn't quite fit the melody. maybe it would work better if the sounds weren't this clear. i don't make music so i have no idea what im saying. |
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When it hits its stride about 2 mins in it goes from great to awesome. But then it soon stops. But what's there, is good, I guess it's just a bit impatient, i think you could string the whole thing out over twice the length, maybe. |
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its nice. not too sure about the acid line at the beginning... good production... i like the synth around the 2.00 min maybe a little too thin. but usual dannn_ quality |
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dannn_ i just listened to the grange hill thing and i really did lol, i'm still loling now, i actually LAUGHED OUT LOUD, mate that is so fucking ace, i'm in love. |
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everyone has to listen to this. that is truly awesome |
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tolst - i think youre right, the acid line doesnt have enough pauses in it, i will simplify it dog - agreed, ixten - how do you mean 'too thin'? is it that when it goes to high notes it sounds wierd, cause thats what I was thinking thank you boys |
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shit thats supposed to be secret for biyc99! it hasnt been released yet has it? |
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yeah thats what i meant and shit, sorry i didnt know it was secret. bummer man, get these posts deleted |
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wicked, good work dann. |
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s ok! glad you liked it. i took it off the zebox anyway, consider that a promo mp3. whats going on with biyc anyway? |
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good make more |
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dann, im damn groovy track.. very to the point and good change ups.. love the freeform synth.. and yes very fine-tuned production - keep it up brotha. |
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im* = im into this. |
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To start it of, i quite like you and your music in general. As already mentioned, good production. Like listening to the little details. The thing i really have to say about the track is, you have to decide if youre making a club bangin´ sort of track, or some more listening type techno thing. For a club banger, i think it sounds to weak. I need more energy. I feel like nodding my head, but not dancing. Personally, i think it would be cool if you could take it into some "i care because you do" (some of the sounds remind me of that album, and its one of all time favourite electronic albums) inspirered direction, with some subtle kicks, and "dusty" production, and even more melodic details, melody lines. I don't know if any of this makes sense to you, ignore it if it doesnt. |
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no I think i get what you are saying, i was thinking some structural rearrangement and tweaking would make this a club dance banger choon but i didnt want to resort to the same old builds and drops that have been done thousands of times. ill consider than icbyd route. metaltrees/fleetmouse- thanks for listening catalyst - you too, PS this took me an afternoon to make. ha! funny everyone saying nice production. i wasnt sure I'd done any |
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after first listening - i can say it's weird but....good after second listening - i can say it's good after third listening - i'm dancing all over the room overall...i'd change only those bouncy bits of the beat. and make them more....sophisticatedd. or make the whole track go boom boom. i dunno. |
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