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I've just exported 10 bars...does it sound right? I'm not sure whether the second 808 sounds OK or not? . |
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I like the 808 except in the very first bar.... It would sound better with maybe just random 808 effects going on for the beginning, and then start the 808 when you start the beat up.... but that's just what I would do.... the drum beat is nice and old school :D maybe a little more could be added to it as you go along.... also an old school synth sound might be nice to incorporate later, as well... |
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Cheers yo, I will be changing parts as I go along...something still doesn't sound quite right to me though. I will try and edit the second 808 line into the first...but it could be just the fact I know there are two which is pissing me off :) |
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i don't know anything about creating music, but i would add an amen break and asher d on vocals! post it when it's done yo! |
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distorted and chopped vocals would do the job. |
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excellent bassline... this has a lot of potential to develop. my only critique so far is that the hand claps are a bit too loud... and i think the snare could use a bit more beefing up as it is a bit too snappy (or maybe that's how you like it, in which case, nevermind). i hope we'll get to hear the finished version. |
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i like the claps and percussion but i think the bass line is boring |
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steve the bassline hasn't been tweaked yet and I think I will add a second 303 in there as well and possibly a synth which should lift it a little. tolst/obara I dunno about chopped distorted vocals or the amen break :{P r40f I like the snare but I will try lessoning the attack a little. The hand claps stay as they are though :{P |
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real 808? |
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pum pin bwwon gluee cap tok pum pin town |
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Reminds me of L F O a LOT! |
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snare pattern is similar to lfo's remix of aftermath by NOW, which is a good thing!! try a nice analogue pad with it! |
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You should tweak the 303, get some cut/res/env action going. |
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Loose the claps |
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Thanks peoples. I am working on this shit right now. |
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more squelch |
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anyone whos anyone twiddles the nobs last i like it brian dance |
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shor decay claps until certain points. sounds a tad cheesy. needs haunting pad. |
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Sounds phat, add a classic dirty breakbeat with a big boom under every loop of the break |
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more cowbell is required...... |
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Does it sound OK? Obviously shit still needs tweaking but does it sound the opposite of what it should (i.e. should it be lively instead?) Thanks as always |
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honestly, i thought the first version sounded much better in just about every way. the only problem with the original was the mix... this sounds like a different song altogether. |
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This isn't a different track, it's just a different section of the same track. It's still a work in progress though and the stuff I did today I think reflects my mood quite heavily so it's a lot more subdued than the first bit. I'll probably just scrap half of it and start over. Cheers lad :) |
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Changed second bit. I think it's a bit better but I dunno. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh fuck it. |
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i like that first clip a lot, but the synth needs more life. fuck it up with filters, fx etc. |
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Lee the track is only 36 seconds long more sqeek by the way were is the rest of the track ? you second link is now dead |
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