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13.8mb 6 minutes 3 seconds long, listen please! |
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per your instructions, i chose to listen. it was ok. i have no other feedback. |
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too many vsts you suck |
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a bit disjointed. not really feeling the drum sounds. or patterns. actually I dont much like it overall. Sorry |
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Have to agree with Dannn_, I like the last 1:30 allot more then the rest though, seems like the drum sounds and that "bwei" sound just works allot better in that tempo. |
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a bit too long and it seems like you didn't have enough glue to make the parts stick together so they're falling apart... |
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^^^ will it be the end to our super-ego ? |
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and yeah, i agree. the sections are disjointed. what irked me more were the drum sounds. i know from your posts, elusive, that you like DUMMMMMM PSCHHHWWWSSST sounds but this stuff seriously made me wonder whether you were still yearning for the years you spent banging on pots and pans in the kitchen. because that's what it sounded like to me. pots and pans being banged. |
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hey thanks fo rthe comments, just got back from work yeah its supposed to be real loud / pots&pans'y , i think its hard and nasty ghetto sort of like that, but yeah dont be 'sorry' for not liking it , im just looking for the perfect beat |
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your the only one has realized any musical 'ego' i have, not me. i hate all of my music to be honest |
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ohno. youre only normal guy. with super ego of course. what else you will try ? classics ? give us a shout |
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ok, way too many ideas in there. keep it simple. the drum distortion around 1:15 sounds quite decent. Stop making stupid juddering sounds in the beat. beat should be BOOM CHA.....BOOM CHA predominantly, your track is not really dnb! you need a "sick" synth or something, not as many VSTs, er yeah. listen to some older dnb stuff. keep it more simple and make it more dirty. dont mess with the tempo. use 164 bpm or 156bpm only that is an order. do not use an amen unless you can cut it in a way i like. listen to http://www.discogs.com/release/31422 esp crystal then listen to Guncheck by Ed Rush and Nico, then http://www.discogs.com/release/1757 after than i would really like to hear a track new track with some ideas more like what I've said. I guess you use a lot of vst/laptop. sounds like it anyway. I call that sound "plasticy" sound, I think that will not help the song,try to use samples more and not worry about making them sonically excellent. I scrunge synths through a 4 track, reverb and distortion, etc all subtle amounts and it makes it sound more real, less plastic. dont use softsynth, and if you do, record synth line solo'd and edit in wave editor and just use rough effects like bit of compression/distorion/etc very subtly just to make it sound less plastic, preferbly record back from speakers with mic and use that/mix that in to make it less plastic. I hope that all makes some kind of sense. I've got high hopes for second dnb track :D |
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sounded great until 25 seconds in... |
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sounds like a medley of seven tracks. The distortion is reeeeeally annoying. I'm annoyed with you for not making this track sound good. When i heard the first 20 seconds i was thinking 'all these other comments are wrong, this track is good" then the truth was realised. For shame. The mixing isn't good either. Make an extended remix of the first 20 seconds. And finally, how the hell is this drum and bass? |
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hey thanks alot man :) i real hate the amen break. well i should instead say that i just prefer to do 100% of drum writing myself with the sounds ive got, so i feel ive got no control if i used amen break or any other. you know what im saying. your correct though its just on a laptop using 4 software sequencers. vst's is just one for EQ and then another for that saturation on the drums. my laptops shit dude, the processor shits @ 80% usage just from 2 sequencers, so i gotta get more stuff. that 'synth' is sampled from some ed rush thing that was on the radio, just cliped it love. good advice thou man thanks |
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good idea Amen Break is really boring |
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Where is the sub in your tune? I only hear a big crunchy distorted kick |
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Amen break is the bestest |
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its probably only me that gets it because i have a sub to support my monitors thats basically turned up 100%, so yeah its not mixed very well |
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way too loud. i hear what you are trying to do. keep going for it. don't ever let anyone tell you how to make your music, but take what you can from their commentary. |
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