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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-02-01 22:37 [#01832340]
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and tell me what you think
http://d50.yousendit.com/E/0C7W8WTGXAFU301P73XQFBANCJ/ham...
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-02-01 22:39 [#01832341]
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and listen to it all the way, no skipping
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-02-01 22:40 [#01832342]
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ah i guess you can skip, no big deal - the progresison wont work thou
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staz
on 2006-02-01 22:45 [#01832344]
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this is a really good tune, i love those pads... what did you use to make it? i hate that question, but sometimes it's interesting to know.
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Gwely Mernans
from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2006-02-01 22:46 [#01832345]
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This is really good. All the sounds are great and fit well together. I like the atmopshere too.
If I were you, i'd take the beat patterns and make more subtle changes rather than just switching them and letting them play out for a bit until a new change occurs.
It's already a fine piece of work but it also has alot of potential to be a 6-8 min track.
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-02-01 22:47 [#01832346]
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in pc game development, what the developers will do is come up with the skeleton of the game, that is, the gameplay elements, stages where youll be shootin gguy sand etc, etc, thats basically what this is its just kind of like placeholders, gonn abe tons more shit.....
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evolume
from seattle (United States) on 2006-02-01 22:47 [#01832347]
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i'm not crazy about the beats. but the background synthy washes are nice.
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-02-01 22:48 [#01832348]
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staz; renoise + ableton live
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-02-01 22:52 [#01832351]
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actually im just kidding its a lazy edit thats all none of that had any relevance was just trying to sound cool ^_^
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oyvinto
on 2006-02-01 23:06 [#01832353]
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nice draft. i like the drums.
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r40f
from qrters tea party on 2006-02-01 23:07 [#01832354]
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i think the beats are too shaky sounding. it's interesting - usually in an electronica piece, i'd think they'd be too rigid, but here it's the opposite... anyway, these are good ideas, but i feel like i'm hearing a rickety version of ae powered by steam and held together with gum. it could use a lot more work, but don't listen to me anyway
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-02-01 23:11 [#01832355]
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shaky sounding?
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oyvinto
on 2006-02-01 23:28 [#01832357]
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i'd agree. but as a draft i liked the sound of the beats, but not the overall progress in the track.. also, it's again very clear where mr cygnus gets his inspiration. (ecstasy)
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Gwely Mernans
from 23rd century entertainment (Canada) on 2006-02-02 01:35 [#01832397]
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I listened to it again and I think the only thing that needs a bit of work is the arrangement. You should make this beat develop in an envane sorta way. The atmosphere is fine the way it is.
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Falito
from Balenciaga on 2006-02-02 01:45 [#01832409]
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very funny mister...stones and waters renoise is like a puzzle,uh?
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plaidzebra
from so long, xlt on 2006-02-02 08:29 [#01832623]
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i'll check this out later if it's still around, i'm on a laptop with no sound right now in the waiting room of a clinic...
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penexpers
from Toronto (Canada) on 2006-02-02 08:37 [#01832632]
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ae
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stefano_azevedo
from Pindorama (Brazil) on 2006-02-02 08:53 [#01832647]
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nice progression, you are cool
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plaidzebra
from so long, xlt on 2006-02-02 10:30 [#01832697]
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the percussion at the start is a little plodding, it picks up later and the track really takes off, maybe not my cup of tea and it ends awkwardly but a very nice listen, you've definitely got a knack for tunes, you're a natural. how long have you been making tunes?
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-02-02 11:14 [#01832744]
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not very long im still very amateurish, and i have a crappy computer.. no other gear.
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-02-02 11:14 [#01832745]
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why would any of you compare it to AE? is it that good or does it just sound like im copying/aping style
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i_x_ten
from arsemuncher on 2006-02-02 11:15 [#01832748]
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thumbs up
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r40f
from qrters tea party on 2006-02-02 11:16 [#01832750]
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i think it's more the sounds you used and the way the beats sound like you're trying to do an ae thing. but there's nothing wrong with that.
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plaidzebra
from so long, xlt on 2006-02-02 11:17 [#01832753]
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only one person mentioned ae. but again, anyone who knows you here knows how much you like ae, so there's an expectation of influence. this track does not sound like ae to me.
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r40f
from qrters tea party on 2006-02-02 11:19 [#01832755]
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yeah, it has to be that i expect him to be influenced by something. i couldn't possibly have an opinion that stands up without some kind of hidden psychological drive behind it. thank you, you are so insightful to review my review.
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plaidzebra
from so long, xlt on 2006-02-02 11:22 [#01832759]
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you moron, my post had nothing to do with your comments. you're not really the center of the universe, sometimes someone just posts about the same time as you without seeing your comment.
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r40f
from qrters tea party on 2006-02-02 11:24 [#01832761]
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well, that's clearly your fault, not my assuming to be the center of the universe.
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plaidzebra
from so long, xlt on 2006-02-02 11:25 [#01832763]
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read my last post again until you understand it, thanks.
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horsefactory
from 💠 (United Kingdom) on 2006-02-02 11:32 [#01832770]
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i really liked it, a shame it ended so abruptly - sounded like the gum holding it together was about to melt
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obara
from Utrecht on 2006-02-02 11:33 [#01832771]
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good sound and not-boring structure. sounds like a....an electronic track.
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DirtyPriest
from Copenhagen (Denmark) on 2006-02-02 11:57 [#01832794]
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The sounds are excellent. Its a good piece of electronica. Not excatly my thing, but i enjoyed listening to it.
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-02-02 14:02 [#01832889]
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thanks all
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penexpers
from Toronto (Canada) on 2006-02-02 14:07 [#01832898]
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If I made music I would copy ae, because they're the best. I just felt too many posts were made without ae being mentioned, and I had to rectify that.
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-02-02 14:18 [#01832905]
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i think it just inevitably happens
for example you grow up living around comedians your whole life you may develop a penchant for being funny, its not that youre copying those individuals its that its rubbed off on you
i dont really even consciously consider musicians when im making music, its just sort of clicking away at stuff and when some good shit comes out i have to get more of it. kind of like having a drug factory and im the only one using the drugs, you know, mixing the chemicals. if other people dig it then thats awesome how much u want 4 a dimebag of cygnus beats niggah?
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-02-02 14:20 [#01832909]
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thats why i dont really think theres such thing as 'bad' music. if the listener is just judging the product, that is, the music... the only reason they dont have to like it is cause of preset bias or maybe the music has a quality that particularly offends them for some reason regardless of bias...
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r40f
from qrters tea party on 2006-02-02 14:29 [#01832922]
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everybody borrows from other people. there's no such thing as a totally original artist who starts with no framework or influence.
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-02-02 14:41 [#01832941]
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as far as ae goes im mainly perplexed just by how original it all is and how fat it all sounds, thats the main inspiration there. sorta challenges you as a listener to consider some strange spaces and situations but also challenges you as a musician to create some stranger and unseen places
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-02-02 14:44 [#01832947]
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can originality be inspiring? yeah sure why not
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Drunken Mastah
from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2006-02-02 14:47 [#01832948]
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hello!
it's quite good! one of the better ones I've heard from you. it sounds a bit like the drums are being repeated in small loops most of the time, though, and with drums like this, that becomes quite apparent.. you should try doing all the drums as one complete track, and don't copy/pasted, just program them as you go on...
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Drunken Mastah
from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2006-02-02 14:49 [#01832951]
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ooo, nipponese phung was next on the itunes playlist and it merged PERFECTLY! I wouldn't have thought a new song was on unless I was looking...
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cygnus
from nowhere and everyplace on 2006-02-02 14:52 [#01832954]
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aahahaha nipponese phung/nosedive is ok, i get pissed when people say they like it though because i sampled so much innit, all thats me is the beats really. thanks man..
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giginger
from Milky Beans (United Kingdom) on 2006-02-02 14:53 [#01832955]
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Yousendit hates me :(
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vlari
from beyond the valley of the LOLs on 2006-02-02 14:55 [#01832957]
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say, you wouldn't mind hooking me up with that ep7 remix you did for the vibes?
I'd like to have the full 12" club-mix
please
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