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So I started a little dnb/jungle roller today, haven't had a chance to listen through my monitors/sub yet so I'm not certain if the soundscape is perfect yet. Anyway, hope you can give me some feedback that'll improve the track. |
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i like it a lot feedback: -the 'drop' needs to be harder. (one way of doing this would be perhaps to run the bassline before the drop through like a highpass filter where the frequency is automated - and then bypass the filter when the drop occurs) - the breaks need to be at the same loud volume (run all the breaks into the same channel and then compress slightly) - dont really like the bassline in the second half it sounds very random (make it different to the first and yet good and solid) etc. good track though let me know wen its finished id play it out! |
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this tune is f u c k i n g SICK. i'm well impressed. where can i download your other tracks? |
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Love the drop! Wicked stuff here. :-) Makes me want to jump around. |
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Tell me when it's done. I'd gladly buy this quality of D n B. |
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I digs it. don't have allot to say about it really. :) |
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REWIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIND!!!!!! |
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could be quantized a bit tighter methinks, it seems a bit loose here & there, but fucking hell, what a bassline. oh man! (noticed some teebee-ish scratching) |
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Mighty track! What I really like in this track is the variation and the freaky bassline. Lovely break at 3:23, don't change it. What I didn't like is the Squarepusher voice sample (I don't know the normal indication) and it sounded a bit chaotic at some places. |
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Grinningcat : I'll work some more on the drop indeed, but I don't really agree about the last bassline, personally I love it :) AlbertoBalsalm : I don't really have much online at the moment, but there's some different stuff over CS2x : Glad to hear you like it :) Isniezot : you too :) Vlari : What parts would you like more quantized? Aesthetics : That voice is from the "think-break", a common break used by many artists before and after come on my selector :) But I guess I could use another kick than the vocal one actually. What places did you find too chaotic? Give me more details and I'll look into it :) Thanks for the feedback, keep it coming! I need all the help I can get. |
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it think it's mainly with the bassline "hits", especially when it's, erm, played "faster" and not sustained over longer measure(? i'm crap at music-tech terms...). it may be a combination with the loops - i don't know. you're the guy who makes loads of tunes, I'm just stuck in numerous loops :) |
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Haha, I understand what you mean, I think it might be because the bass stabs are exactly 100% on time while the drums have some natural/human offset as they're breakbeats. But I'll try to look into it and see if I can quantize those parts in general somewhat more :) btw. that scratching was a nice little detail, yes? :) |
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this shit is sick. |
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i'm glad i'm able to make sense. i'm pretty sure it's the shuffly breakbeats' fault. re: the scratch. a nice little detail indeed. i almost thought it was some out-take from a teebee mix for a minute :D must be a bitch for him dragging along that beats and breaks record everywhere. I guess he'll be anticipating the day when digital scrathing is perfected. then he can just burn it on a cdr and stick it along with his other digital dubplates |
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Haha, I'm sure nobody would really notice if it was digital anyway :p |
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thanks man :) |
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no by sick i mean i'm appaled by it. its a fucking disgrace. |
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that was a joke and i feel bad about saying that because seriously its the real fucking deal :) |
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Hehe, thanks for clearing that up :P |
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Holy shit! Brillllliant stuff you got here. Just make the intro before the bass a bit shorter and I'd buy it. |
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great beats and that, but yeah, the bassline was a bit jumpy halfways through.- excellent bass sound...how did you make that? please say reason... :P |
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Hehe, not reason :) |
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I think you used a distorted 808 kick drum somehow..... Tho I'm probably wrong. |
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I suggest picking up some other impakt releases, they are very good! Great stuff by far! By far, very well rounded, the Pantera of unsigned electronic music : ) |
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Thanks man :) futureimage : hehe, yes, you were wrong :) |
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pretty mental. In all honnesty i'd scrap the whole of the intro until the kick in and try something new. That's the only bit i really didnt like. The rest is fantastic though. |
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Hm good idea, I could try making more out of the intro. |
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bumpidump :) |
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Very amateurish and unoriginal. Sorry, that's my honest opinion. I've liked some other stuff you posted before, just not this. |
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That kind of creative feedback will definitely help me improve it! Thumbs up. |
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Fine tune, maybe a bit too long, and the main break (from 2:00) is to much overwhelmed by the hi-hat sound. I've liked your noise track more :-). |
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i read everyone's positive comments and was looking forward to hearing this. first sound very nice and then: :| is that amen break with the voice sample really necessary? geez... thank goodness it's all killer afterwards. wow. sounds remix-y though. a bit bad company ish. but yeah, nice one. |
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I had this playing while I was making a sausage sandwich. Grinningcat is a contrary idiot as most of the replies are. It was a nice soundtrack to the grill. |
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I'm redoing the intro and the think break is gone..I'm also improving the rest of the song. JivverDicker : appreciate it :) |
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wow, niiice track. :) the only criticism i have really is that the intro is maybe a bit long. good stuff... thanks for sharing! ! |
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