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Would really appreciate some feedback on my new one as im not sure whether it needs some vocals (i was thinking of going all clouddead on it) anyhow heres a direct link if that doesnt work or you a soundclick member (yer sorry its soundlcick) then go and if u hadnt guessed its called the forgetfull |
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i know theres been laods of spam up at the mo but please have a listen peeps :( |
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listening now. speaking of teh spam, my threads a bit lower. i like how the clicks sound like they're being pulled, allot like bucephalus bouncing ball. good synths too, very absorbing. the voices were a nice touch. doesnt seem to go anywhere but thats not a bad thing, its a nice place to stay. no wait, actually im typing this as i listen, good quiet breaks and guitar bit. |
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cheers for listening im really unsure about it im not sure i like the structure i think maybe it stops n starts too much but i dunno maybe thats a good thing :) tahnks for listening |
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yeah structure.. you got all the right parts, maybe just re-arrange them if you're not to sure. without the guitar or breaks that come in later, you already got a full ambient track which is actually great. |
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cheers :) |
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ahh, this is the COMPLETE track.... i very much like all the different sections, with changes in texture, rhythm and timbre. the overall rhythm is very lazy, but still drags you along - very good. there's one small riff/phrase that i really like. it first appears at 37 seconds, introducing the "kids" sample, and appears several times throughout the piece. it brings a very refreshing brightness, to this mostly dark & gloomy track. well played old man! |
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cheers thats just a cut up vocal i agree it does seem to switch between gloom and like anti-gloom hehe i was kinda going for that though |
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bumped cos it dindt get many listens (sorry) |
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doesn't work... |
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hey this is pretty good stuff as usual. |
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thankie very much :) |
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as usual lol as if i make good music HA sorry bit down on my stuff at mo |
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why is it sometimes you spend hours on a track, are really proud of it. then you hear something else, go back to your music and think ''why did i make this shit?' |
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lol i dont know but i get it alot, like i like somethig then someone doesnt like it and im like "oh maybe it is shit" guess its lack of confidence or arrogance its deffinatly one fo the two |
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