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well, in your opinion, does this have potential? |
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intro is far too long.the layers are great but too obvious, i would liked to have heard more percussion after it kicked in. the track is great but it needs trimming a bit. yeah more percussion. |
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in general good work, you need to re-organise the ins and outs. keep at it! :) |
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thanks. i was thinking about getting rid of all the percussion actually; i'm more of a melody person..... so doing decent drums/percussion takes a long time. thanks for the feedback. |
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btw it is very rare to come across a user with only a few points who isn't a) spamming b)dupe account c)troll from another forum |
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Quite hypnotic -- I thought the percussion came in at a good time, but then ... when the percussion stopped, the track lost its momentum and I don't think the reintroduction of the percussion worked... loses its flow. Suggestion: Instead of dropping the percussion, bring it to the forefront (not gradually) and with a little development. But the sounds were nice. |
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It's very nice, very nice. I agree the percussion coming out and coming back might not be too effective, it makes it seem as if the percussion's just kind of sitting on top of the melody, it's as if it doesn't really "engage", if that makes sense. But I loved the rolling tune and the bass was great, this has potential to be a lost Ambient Techno classic. Can you give me pointers on what you used to get that great bass sound? |
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Hi, nice track. Was the remix ok? Sorry for the perverted voice saying your name, I don't know what I was thinking with that. It's my awful sense of "humour" again. |
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live life like a diamond ring |
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Space is a place (let me out) Space is a place (let me out) Space is a place called love, love |
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i liked the intro very much but felt startled by the rhythmic accentuation of the beat which was probably compounded by how long it lasted (the beat). keep working on it because it has potential, and quality. just knickity wick any unpleasant unsubtleties. |
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thanks for the feeding back people. gay; i dunno how i got the bass sound quite so nice, just tweaking the synth till it sounded nice. i sound like such fraud. i should be talking about ring modulation and things like that. i have decided i'm going to take this down the ambient techno route. here is a slighty different cut, still not finished. |
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reminds me of grinning ape. enjoyment rate slowly rising... finish it! |
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FINISHED VERSION! |
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aw c'mon i finished it! |
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kinda SAW I -ish.cool |
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It really is very, very good, i like it a lot, it's tightened up, it sounds more "together", the bit at 3:00 is a deft change of gear, it's a genuinely awesome track. |
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I may listen later. Don't ban me. |
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i skipped to the second version when i noticed there was one. very clean and clear, i like this so far. this is indeed very saw-1 ish as someone stated earlier, it's cute and playful. very diggable, i don't find anything displeasing about this at all. very good work, i hope to hear more from you |
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hey thanks guys.... anyone else should check it i guess if they like SAW 1. whoop. |
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eh id finish it if i could. i can never finish what i start.. go for it methinks. |
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Brilliant. |
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Perrsonally... no. It's a total waste of yourr time. I haven't listened to it, but I can still say that. Just like The_Funkmasters poetrry. |
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i did finish it! look further down the post. anus. thanks for your opinion. |
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But what do you mean by 'worrth it'? |
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just listen to it, you might like it. |
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Cool stuff, I like it even though I slightly dislike that distorted snare :) |
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What a nice tune! Everything fits perfectly, I like the backgroung fluctuations and lead melody, maybe only the bass is too strong... |
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...and the snare, it's maybe a bit too "obvious". |
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tthanks :) |
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very nice track |
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