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Raz0rBlade_uk
on 2005-06-24 16:44 [#01643351]
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Hi guys. I know I've not been posting much recently (AH! Lurker!) but it's been so hot that having my computer on has been a dangerous option when it comes to the heat of my room.
Anyway, more to the point. Here's a new track (brand spanking). If you tell me to work on it more then I will do just that. It's not my usual really. It's quite random and yeh. Please listen. Would really appreciate it!
You Are Lines.mp3
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_gvarek_
from next to you (Poland) on 2005-06-24 16:56 [#01643363]
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Sorry... not liking it. The pace changes are to frenetic. And the drum... it just doesn`t seem to fit somehow...
Easy for me to say, I`m not a musician, but I advise you to work on this one.
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Drunken Mastah
from OPPERKLASSESVIN!!! (Norway) on 2005-06-24 18:03 [#01643423]
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the first few seconds has a great idea hidden in them, but the song got a bit boring after a while. try to find the idea and use that as background and do something else on top.
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