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Thanks to virginpusher I feel confident in showing this song Mr. giginger would you mind giving me a critique on this unfinished track im working its called system crash thank you sir |
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Sweet! downloading :) |
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the beats are pretty solid - nice job with them. they could be brought out more in the mix though - they're a little buried and muddy. i'm not really feeling the retro synths at the beginning, but i bet i'm the only one who says that. the song could be longer - it ends a little abruptly. i think the title should be Porkchops & Applesauce instead of system crash. nice work, diazo! :) |
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haha thanks, The song isnt finished yet Im just kind of struck right now Im definitely gonna clean those drums up a bit...panda said the same thing thank you for listening |
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Yeah i like the way he structured those beats. Maybe he could mix those muddy dirty beats with bits and parts of clean ones. That might work. :) |
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Yeah! This is quite nice. I like it. A smidgeon of tidying up on the drums to really make them tighter at the start so when you start those snare rolls they really stand out a bit more. Maybe accentuate those rolls at their beginning to really accent them. That's probably a preference thing though. I like the track though. I'll have another listen soon and let you know what I think :) |
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[downloading] |
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You mean raise the volume slightly when the drum rolls start then slowly lower them? Thanks for listening and the advice i do really appreciate it |
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Yeah! An Fortzepiano :D I don't know how to spell it :d |
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cool ill post it again when its finished |
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Cool :) |
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this is actually pretty damn awesome. the mixing is top notch. let me know when this track is finished. I'll download it for sure. |
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cool thank you I definitely will! |
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i like the bass line a lot, it really carries the song through, then with the foreground noises, good track indeed |
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bump, perhaps a few more critiques? |
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*helpful bump* |
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a listen by more people is needed for sure |
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Thank you my friends Ill give it one last bump, for old time sake (dont know what that means) |
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